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Lorikeet Shmorikeet


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Gummy wakes up in a dark, smelly room with no memory of how he had gotten there. Now it's up to him to solve the mystery of where he is, why he's there, and how to get back home.

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this is epic, please write more :pinkiehappy:

2864054 Thanks! Nice avatar by the way:derpytongue2:

It's always very hard to know what to expect from a story that barely broke the minimum word count, but this could end up pretty interesting.

so pretty much its like new York where people have alligators as pets and when they get bigger they flush them?

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I feel like that's a horrible thing to do, if they know whats going to happen, don't buy a gator in the first place just to flush it

2886641 I know, some people are just stupid :facehoof:

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I think it might also be animal abuse

2886678 It is definitely animal abuse :fluttershysad: fluttershy does not approve

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of course I don't approve, its evil and it is bad
Say hello to fluttershy

2886740 Lol hey there Fluttershy! I'm a huge fan! :rainbowkiss:

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She lives with me and we are in a little group called ponies in our heads, we each have one pony...and mine is fluttershy
its nice to meet you...

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Okay, that was pretty funny. Definitely laughed when Gummy pissed on Dave's foot. It would be amusing if Spike shows up and they have a baby-dragon scuffle.

Also, most random ransom ploy ever-- kidnap a pet alligator so its owner's friend will give up a piece of jewelry that the kidnapper wants just so he can eat it. Dave seems like a bit of a dork.

2887576 Dave is a dork. He is also pink. :rainbowlaugh:
Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

I find it amusing that there is 26 comments on how good this story is, and only 1 like:rainbowlaugh:

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