That was amazing. The only thing that threw me off was the ending. While it was funny, it was also dangerous since it wouldn't take much for rarity to put 2 and 2 together. I could be wrong, but it's likely. Looking forward to more! Also, have you thought about doing Vixy Hooves?
The way she said that made you kinda feel bad about what she was offering. That feeling didn't last long though. You would be plowing that marshmallow ass, for humanity!
The way she said that made you kinda feel bad about what she was offering. That feeling didn't last long though. You would be plowing that marshmallow ass, for humanity! Quote of the day!
I loved this chapter it was awesome,sweat,funny and cute and don't forget sexy.but if it was me I'd still be with Rarity I just try to have them both just because you have don't mean you throw I would tell Rarity that I just got tired of her treating sex like it was the most horrible thing in the world and if she wanted to keep doing it she would have to make a herd with me.
So once everything is put away do you sit and relax on the living room couch, just looking to the ceiling. You let out a sad sigh, you knew this was going to be a long month. You don't have much time to think as you hear the door open and strike the little bell Rarity had set. You look over to the entrance and see Sweetie Belle covered in a substance you weren't quite sure what it was. Until you take a closer look.
“Sweets, please tell me that is not what I think it is.” You say in an agitated voice.
She looks around nervously. “What if I said it wasn't?” She looks to you with a nervous look.
“Then I would call you a liar.” You cover your face in an attempt to calm yourself.
Is that "substance" what I think it is?
“Please tell me how you got covered in red paint?” The words muffle past your hands.
Oh. Paint. Right. I knew that. .....Shut up! I'm not perverted or anything!
Good story. Foalcon isn't the most morally correct thing to read or write, but it's interesting nonetheless.
Who next my vote for twist
ya fuck rarity oh wait dont you have her sister for that lol
That was awesome! I say Silver Spoon should be next
That was amazing. The only thing that threw me off was the ending. While it was funny, it was also dangerous since it wouldn't take much for rarity to put 2 and 2 together. I could be wrong, but it's likely. Looking forward to more! Also, have you thought about doing Vixy Hooves?
Maybe try filly versions of many many ponies, gives you more content possibilities.
Filly Luna
Luna as a filly would be awesome
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I will admit I am unsure what/who "Vixy Hooves" is. Please, enlighten me.
Diamond Tiara plz.
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Basically a tumblr featuring Foalcon with a fox Colored Filly. Also, I wanna see something with Silver Spoon being done for the next chapter.
Twist please
Twist or Dinkie
(has Dinkie ever been done?)
...Oh the irony...the sick, twisted irony.
Well Rarity, that's what you get for make sex seem like a chore.Now I'm fucking your sister!
Now if only Spike had learn that lesson more often.
great chapter man
OMG that was great!
I think u should have Silver Spoon next
Silver Spoon, Diamond Tiara, Twist, Dinky Doo, the filly from the Crystal Empire, the list goes on and on!
i would vote for silver spoon, inkie pie or twist
or what Jonathan Jack ONeill said and start doing filly versions of other ponies (filly vinyl and tavi threesome FTW )
Is it just me or was I the only one thinking this when i read this part?
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Four down, please do Twist next!
Or Silverspoon.
*option. Not 'options.'
hahahaha
Okay, I've tallied the votes, and as of now, we have:
Twist - 8 votes
Woona - 6 votes
Silver Spoon - 12 votes
Diamond Tiara - 7 votes
Dinky Doo - 2 votes
Vixy Hooves - 4 votes
Filly Inkie Pie - 1 vote
"It's not 'gravel', it's 'grovel'; and don't! He's not the ki-"
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The way she said that made you kinda feel bad about what she was offering. That feeling didn't last long though. You would be plowing that marshmallow ass, for humanity!
Quote of the day!
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She's making small stones? The word you're looking for is 'grovelling'.
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Too bad for you, Rares. It's what you get for not being nice. You can go back to pining after your non-existent Prince Charming.
3968528 No no, continue. Love that part.
I loved this chapter it was awesome,sweat,funny and cute and don't forget sexy.but if it was me I'd still be with Rarity I just try to have them both just because you have don't mean you throw I would tell Rarity that I just got tired of her treating sex like it was the most horrible thing in the world and if she wanted to keep doing it she would have to make a herd with me.
Is that "substance" what I think it is?
Oh. Paint. Right. I knew that. .....Shut up! I'm not perverted or anything!
Good story. Foalcon isn't the most morally correct thing to read or write, but it's interesting nonetheless.
5434179 to be honest i thought it was cum
Rarity got served. Lol
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Personally I thought it was tree sap :/
this was actually kinda sweet
That was beautiful.