so yeah been enjoying this set of shorts the first one but now that i see that second part-er for DT and SP it only makes me want one for Scootaloo.now mind you i do 'want' it but i am not demanding it just liked mah scoot-a-feels.
4296049 Read the diamond tiara and silver spoon one. People seemed to really like my take on the protagonist in that particular chapter. Hell, I might even give his attitude a spin off because of it.
As for the grammar? I agree, I have gotten a lot better as I continue to write.. Maybe I will go back and do some edits.
I feel I'm gonna burn in pony hell for reading these, but who cares? Thes stories are really good, and I've read them multiple times. Salsav, keep up the good writing!
4667995 Since when did I ask if you cared? You obviously have some sick mental condition to write this.
I said this because I legitimately thought you were a respectable author, but like so many on this sight you have a fucking problem you need to bring to a therapist (I pity your parents).
4705413 Not exactly. You have the rule confused. It's no humans or anthro characters under the age of 18. As long as those two things are 18+, then everything else can be underage. Fillies, griffins, donkeys. Doesnt matter their ages. Just gotta keep the humans and anthro 18+..
I think it's because the advertisers that help run the site and/or other people/companies/whatever that help pay for this site has come up with those rules. I guess the admins have no choice but to obey or they wouldn't be able to run the site.
Unless we all sent money to the admins that is. No more need for ad-companies and we could write ANYTHING we wanted!
You know, I think this one is my favorite chapter, and the awkwardness of the sweet innocent kid walking in at just the wrong moment? Delicious. - And since everyone else seems to be throwing out their own ideas, how about one with Zecora? Let me explain: Zecora is trying out a new brew and has asked our 'hero' for assistance in case something goes wrong because he as a natural resistance (not immunity, but near enough to it) towards most simple (wild) magics. Zecora is attempting to make a potion that will negate or at least lessen the effects of a heat cycle. Of course, something DOES go wrong and now Zecora has de-aged, and is still, unfortunately, feeling the heat. You're a talented writer. I'm sure you can (if you want this idea) take it from there. "Oh my and woe is me! For I have turned into a filly!" "D'aaaw! Zecora, you're adorable!" *picks up Zecora and glomps her* "Now is not time for tight-squeeze snuggles! I am still feeling mating troubles!" *Blushing*
Well you guys are fucked up my friend Clopper Brony showed me this and want to rant about it, you guys are zoosexualist, and I haven't read it but my friends and other had short bit and we all responded except CB WTF!!!!
4668004 To be honoust, I come for the actual plots. I'm not into feral, so I imagine them as Anthro. . I read this here for the Derpy. Don't need to read every Chapter if you don't like it, but fighting it doesn't do any good. I've already reported stuff, and nothing was done. I'd say even most foal-con. readers and Authors are against EqG characters or HiE fooling with literal Animals like Dog Spike, but the site rules don't let any One bring those down. Even foal-con. used to be banned, but I guess fighting it so much made them devide it would continue to be published. The illegalisation results in higher rates of the crime, due to rebellion, so it is futile to ban it, since allowing it will paradoxically result in less of the activity. I personally would say most foal-con. Bronies and Pegasisters are not pedos at all, and that they see them as mature and practically adults or legal youths, with just the appearance of A child to the foreigner alien Humans. Of course, some writers are sick, but Sal I would say is not one of them.
i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/263/915/292.png
The fuck
Best ending ever
Always a good time with Salsav91
OMG PLEASE CONTINUE IT!
this better not but the end
You know you fucked up with that ending, right!?
Curious filly, who enjoyed the smell of sex and is very happy to see the 'stud' of Ponyville.
It doesn't have to be next, but Dinky is so up for a turn.
4041446
i18.photobucket.com/albums/b142/DMapes/WrongNeighborhood_zps97ec4c7a.png
Best mare ever!
So...next chapter is Dinky?
4042582 I don't care!!! I still chop you
Oh come on! That was a perfect opening for Dinky!
Still amazing chapter though. Needed more Derpy, and shoulda had Dinky... but I digress. Excellent stuffs.
4041411
While I disagree with how short this chapter is, I'm still glad to see that you've returned. Looking forward to future updates.
Nice finally Derpy getting her shot. Please continue!
The people demand Dinky!
Man, you find perfect main character for clopfic. Please, continue his adventure.
so yeah been enjoying this set of shorts the first one but now that i see that second part-er for DT and SP it only makes me want one for Scootaloo.now mind you i do 'want' it but i am not demanding it just liked mah scoot-a-feels.
i gotta agree with the crowd here, the derpy one is my favroite so far. deffinitely worthy of being at least a side story if not its own spin off
4224023 Hehehe
4224023
Or still with a male anon. Personally, I'd be cool with either idea!
4041446 You were warned hdfloyd73.files.wordpress.com/2014/03/funny-animals-i-warned-you-man.jpg
4296049
Read the diamond tiara and silver spoon one. People seemed to really like my take on the protagonist in that particular chapter. Hell, I might even give his attitude a spin off because of it.
As for the grammar? I agree, I have gotten a lot better as I continue to write.. Maybe I will go back and do some edits.
I feel I'm gonna burn in pony hell for reading these, but who cares? Thes stories are really good, and I've read them multiple times. Salsav, keep up the good writing!
42/12 Muffins for you! : derpy :
Cant wait for more XD
4296140 dude r u still making these? PLEASE SAY YES!
I was going to follow you until I found this, you sick fuck.
WHY MUST EVERY AUTHOR I LIKE HAVE SOME SICK RAPE OR PEDOPHELIA FETISH STORY!?
4667986
I care, why?
2906269
*pedo country*
So don't try to reason with these sickos man.
4667995 Since when did I ask if you cared? You obviously have some sick mental condition to write this.
I said this because I legitimately thought you were a respectable author, but like so many on this sight you have a fucking problem you need to bring to a therapist (I pity your parents).
4668016
Reported. Have a nice day.
4668033 Wow, what a wuss.
not that i reject it or anything, but aren't stories with humansxponies have to have older than 18 year olds?
4705413
Not exactly. You have the rule confused. It's no humans or anthro characters under the age of 18. As long as those two things are 18+, then everything else can be underage. Fillies, griffins, donkeys. Doesnt matter their ages. Just gotta keep the humans and anthro 18+..
I have no idea why..
4705539
I think it's because the advertisers that help run the site and/or other people/companies/whatever that help pay for this site has come up with those rules. I guess the admins have no choice but to obey or they wouldn't be able to run the site.
Unless we all sent money to the admins that is. No more need for ad-companies and we could write ANYTHING we wanted!
You know, I think this one is my favorite chapter, and the awkwardness of the sweet innocent kid walking in at just the wrong moment? Delicious.
-
And since everyone else seems to be throwing out their own ideas, how about one with Zecora? Let me explain: Zecora is trying out a new brew and has asked our 'hero' for assistance in case something goes wrong because he as a natural resistance (not immunity, but near enough to it) towards most simple (wild) magics. Zecora is attempting to make a potion that will negate or at least lessen the effects of a heat cycle. Of course, something DOES go wrong and now Zecora has de-aged, and is still, unfortunately, feeling the heat.
You're a talented writer. I'm sure you can (if you want this idea) take it from there.
"Oh my and woe is me! For I have turned into a filly!"
"D'aaaw! Zecora, you're adorable!" *picks up Zecora and glomps her*
"Now is not time for tight-squeeze snuggles! I am still feeling mating troubles!" *Blushing*
Oh hello satan what a nice day we are having!!
5272518
I'm right there with you.
Who knows maybe we'll be neighbors.
Your writing since the beginning of this collection of one shots has significantly improved. Wonderful job!
4705539
More? Please?
Only one thing for this.
derpicdn.net/img/2013/12/15/497309/large.png
5434179 At the very least it's all consensual for the most part, and that's a plus in my book.... I'm going to Hell aren't I?
5512415
Take solace in the fact that you're not going alone.
Well you guys are fucked up my friend Clopper Brony showed me this and want to rant about it, you guys are zoosexualist, and I haven't read it but my friends and other had short bit and we all responded except CB WTF!!!!
5568996
My general reaction to you and your friends.
i.imgur.com/juK5G2e.gif
Also I think you meant zoophiles and not zoosexualist. If you're going to insult someone then make sure to use your brain.
i.imgur.com/CrBdUMg.jpg
When he was thinking of a lie to tell Dinky, I couldn't help but think of the Grinch.
“Jesus Derpy.” You say under your breath.
ALL PRAISE THE NEW HOLY SAVIOR JESUS DERPY.
5386171 Let's all be honest, There will be a small nation reserved for "Our People" down there in hell.
4668004
To be honoust, I come for the actual plots. I'm not into feral, so I imagine them as Anthro. . I read this here for the Derpy. Don't need to read every Chapter if you don't like it, but fighting it doesn't do any good. I've already reported stuff, and nothing was done.
I'd say even most foal-con. readers and Authors are against EqG characters or HiE fooling with literal Animals like Dog Spike, but the site rules don't let any One bring those down. Even foal-con. used to be banned, but I guess fighting it so much made them devide it would continue to be published. The illegalisation results in higher rates of the crime, due to rebellion, so it is futile to ban it, since allowing it will paradoxically result in less of the activity. I personally would say most foal-con. Bronies and Pegasisters are not pedos at all, and that they see them as mature and practically adults or legal youths, with just the appearance of A child to the foreigner alien Humans. Of course, some writers are sick, but Sal I would say is not one of them.