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Elite Task Force: Dawn Shield.
Aww yeah, it's getting real now!
good good! I hope to see more! Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
Golf claps.
I like this a lot so far, the origional was good too, but this one is my favorite. I will continue reading and waiting for the next chapters.
I think you are trying to lead the readers astray with the second sentence, and "the Light born of Harmony and Order" from the prophecy will actually be Twilight's and Midnight's child That's my guess anyway.
...Where the only easy day, was yesterday!
3098987 And the beach trip next tuesday
3098998 Right, right.
Awesome!
Seiei* Sentai Dawn Shield sounds good. Looking forward to possible giant fights. Unless they operate more like Kamen Riders, in which case, AJ will have the deadliest kick of all.
*Adjective form of Elite in Japanese
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Yep pretty much!
Time for act II
Only issue I noticed. Just a nitpick. Carry on, can't wait to see what else you have planned.
you know. If you are changing history by editing this. chaotic harmony will be having a paradox. shiro or his kids will look at the fimfic book, and things will be different than before. I wonder what their reaction will be. ;P
(YOU BETTER DO AS BEFORE OR FIND NEW WAY TO LET SCOOTS SEE. GET HIS BROTHER OR LET MIDNIGHT LEARN HOW TO MAKE THAT RUNE!!!
Btw. when children of chaos will be released?
3108917 You'll see what I do. As for Children of Chaos... Soon, my friend, soon.
3108934 good. I love your style, there was so much laughing and smirking when reading your stories, that lately I've begun to miss it. I hope this rewrite and children of chaos will help me get past last year of high school that is soon to begin.
3110437 what grade?
3110850
ugh... now may start problems with my poor english and any possible differences between countries. Now I am starting third year in three-year school, so last one, that will end with exams we call maturity exams (this is the best translation I can think of this late at night ,02:35 am) these are the mos important, and the most usles in real life, exams in our schooling, that will define what university and job we may get.
I think that is what you meant, but if I am wrong then sorry, and please try ask it in different way. I am quite nervous person, so I can't focus before any test or exam, and it is stories like yours (light and funny even in the darkest parts, for me at least.) that let me cool down and actually learn something.
3111198 Well then, I'm glad I can help.
My awesomeness meter blew up while reading this fic.
That thing was $10
3112454 Sorry, but I am not responsible for exploded awesome meters, russtled jimmies, or adorable induced diabetes.
Seeing how The Element of Light and See No Evil were removed are they too being rewritten to sync with Dawn Shield?
3116769 No. The story is being compleatly overhauled. It will share some elements with the original, but not too many.
3118334 I'm afrain you're mistaken. I scanned back through the chapters just in case I derped, but they never met.
3116880
Ah alright, well I still can't wait.
3118907
This is why I said that Midnight knew about her brother, yes they hadn't met but that wasn't the issue at all.
This is taken from chapter5
This is taken from chapter 10
Doesn't this mean he is surprised about something he already knew?
3119710 oh... oops.
3100618 just look at captain price and task force 141.
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WAIT A MINUTE!! Dawn Shield equal Task Force 141?!
i feel that you have been ruching this along a little too fast. I don't feel like there's chemistry between Twi and Midnight. The elements thing seems a little contrived, and things are seeming more and more implausible as we go on. It still has potential, but my willing suspension of disbelief is stretched almost to its limits
The first act has ended... But the fight has only just begun...