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6584636 I prefer
6584727
That works too
Well... just finished the whole thing in few days
Great work imho. The recent twist was fun... but there are many more things I liked but writing on my phone is too much for long explanations
Hope the next chapter will arrive soon. Hard to stop after reading so much
6596145 Every Friday, until the end of this act. After that, I'll start posting the next act every Friday after I finish it.
P.S. I'm glad you've been enjoying it
6597580 not soon enough , but i will manage have more high octane fic to satisfy my reading needs, i am a word junkie, and i will have my daily fix of pony words
I think it's bullshit that the most evasive pony couldn't dodge some spit. Like, his thing is "not getting caught". Not Even Pinkie. But as soon as it's convenient, he has zero reactions, perception, and agility.
I point this out because it broke the immersion in the story for me, which hasn't happened in a while. Since I haven't really read past this chapter, it's kind of hard for me to know if it would be easy to switch him out for Sweetie or Nurse Redheart, or somepony along those lines.
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He was caught by surprise. All his focus was on looking for the kid's mother, so he wasn't paying attention to the kid. You can be the fastest being in the world, but it doesn't mean anything if you don't see the attack coming.
Besides, his thing is more running away than quick reactions. That's more Scootaloo's thing.
If you think that could have been worded better in the story, I'm always open to suggestions.