I loved the original but this is turning out great.

Alternate earth where humans can use magic?

2891976 An alternate world entirely. The world is from a novel I've been planning for about 9 years.

i liek it mak moar pls

2892008 Ah, thanks for the background. I was killing myself trying to reference the world you were using.

shows signs of a unique form of magic never before seen in Equestria and needs constant observation.

More than you know Twilight, more than you know!

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Make it available once you can.

I didn't read the original fiction, but thanks to this comment 2892008 my attention is piqued.
Let's see where you will take this

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How is your novel going?

2892008 Publish it, put a link up on Amazon or something. Then I will buy it.

I'm really surprised that you were forced to remove a story just because you are separately posting "version 2.0". I could swear I've seen reboots and rewrites that still had an original on the site, but maybe I'm mistaken.

Enjoying the read so far, keep it up!

Oh, found a typo

Everything about him was the different... except his eyes... those horrid reminders of what he once was were still the same evil scarlet

Mr. E really? Why not call him Mr. Ed and get it over with.
I do like where this story is going though.

"shows signs of a unique form of magic never before seen in equestria" omgrd the foreshadowing!

“Because I'm pretty sure I’m hallucinating. You're not a big cat are you?”

The nurse's confusion deepened, “No, I’m a regular pony, just like you.”

Would be interested to know how things would have developed, if she hadn't told him she was a pony. He would have still thought for a while that he was on drugs!

“Mr. E”

Um... Why Mister E for mysterious? Wouldn't it be Mister M then?

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Sound "Mr.E" out slowly, you'll get it then. :)

This is pretty good! I like it!

Wow, the old amnesia excuse, they always buy that!
But this raises the question: What's gonna happen now?