Time-travel is a bit of a sore subject for Twilight Sparkle. Hence, when the compiled secrets and techniques to do just that drop themselves into her lap, she is not particularly happy. Then she sees herself kissing Rarity, and that's the end of the world...
Unless she can save it from herself. Which she can't, really.
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Interesting. I was a bit skeptical with the premise being simply romance based, but you played this chapter out nicely focusing on the implications Twilight was running through her mind. I especially liked how Twilight kept track of exactly how many times her eye twitched. I'll be watching to see how this develops.
This promises to be most entertaining. I have only one issue with this chapter. Don't you think it's kind of insulting to categorize asking Luna as "searching low"? Just saying...
In any case, I look forward to more.
2800028 That was meant to signify how probable the search was, I guess I saw it that way
2798461 Yayy!
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Ah. I interpreted the high and low in terms of authority and reverence, so you can probably see why I was so put off by Luna and Owloysius being put on the same level. You might want to make that a bit clearer...
Wibbly-wobbly, timey-wimey. I hope everything works out for them in the end D:
Imagine a time-traveler goes back in time with the intent to cause his or her parents' demise before he was even concieved
I take it that the time traveler is dyslexic, then? ;)
“That would be too extreme a conclusion, yeah,” Twilight groaned from beside her, leaning on the Princess's back and looking like she'd been sleepless for ages.
Fwahahaha. Nice to see somepony other than Pinkie Pie written as a lucid dreamer :)
Frowning, she reached over and pushed her tongue back into her mouth and closed it shut with a little nudge. On an afterthought, she picked her falling tail off the edge of the bed and put it neatly under the navy-blue covers.
This.. is just perfect. Twilight objecting to even sleeping in an untidy way? So in-character.
But once it was done with, little bubbles and radio buttons of thought began opening in her mind. The ideas flew, and Twilight eagerly followed.
I can hardly believe how perfect and hilarious a simile that is.
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter. If this is about what I think it is, then, Prediction: she doesn't get anywhere until she gives up trying to find out, and just tries instead.
2871481 All stories get happy eventually
2872338 I can't say, really. That was not something I had in mind when writing, but I guess it can be seen that way. Anyway, thanks for the interest
Um, unless all this time travel has had far deeper ramifications than we realized, Rarity shouldn't have hands.
In any case, a tantalizing chapter. I just hope you've got this all planned out somewhere...
2877181 Wow. Some ramifications indeed.
So.. is this story dead? Because it's really good and more would be nice.