Following the events of "Secrets of my Excess" Rarity joins Twilight Sparkle and the Royal Sisters for brunch, hoping to gain advice on dealing with a certain young dragon and the feelings she keeps hidden.
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It's a cute story and really would like to see how this turns out.
Poor Luna!
Could have been longer, and I found it weird that a story about Rarity and Spike ended on a cliff hanger about Luna's love life, but it's still good! Keep it up!
Really good :) but its too short.
LUNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
For the love of god! My eyes! Try this:
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@ Anon: Yeah, sorry about that. I need to fix it, but wanted to upload it before I lost my nerve.
Thanks for all the comments, everypony! Please forgive the shortness, but I'm working on the next bit, and hope to increase the length for the next part. Also, please forgive any and all tangents, including Luna and her love life.
12:37 am: Fixed the format. Unsure if it's proper now.
hmm, an interesting start, tracked
Follow your heart Rarity!
Hang on... so to solve the aging problem, rarity will steal lifespan from others... and, everybody's okay with this?
@ErekLich: She's going to steal some from Spike, so they will live the same length of time. Should've clarified that, I guess.
111082 Pretty clear to me. I wonder if she'll miss her friends, though.
Complete? Pity I could see a lot more to this... but its your choice and a very good story anyhow.
Love to see a sequal on this; the promise is vast with this one
u could go pretty far with this fic, being that rarity and spike are gonna live to the same age.
also is this how the age spell works? ex:
Spike lives 500 years
Rarity lives 100 years
*substract 200 years from Spike*
*add those 200 to Rarity*
300 years of life for both of em?
Whenever I see Hetero Celestia, my brain does this
, also I cannot help but feel
with regards to Rarity, her feelings and the convienient "everything fixes the age gap" spell. Decent for a one shot, but could've been so much better with some more development of the Princess' love lifes contrasting Rarity's storybook romantic ideals.
This is a great story. I liked the idea of Rarity waiting for Spike to mature before taking it beyond the 'Friend-zone'. I must say though that I hope Spike can wait that long and that the age spell doesn't complicate things. Very well done.
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You might want to re-read that section again; nothing says the Captain of the Guard was a stallion.
3064670 fair enough.
Bad formatting and EXTREMELY short, but I still like re-reading this.