this was nice My only hope for the future is that we don't have wait as long. Not to say it isnt wort the wait, but it would be nice with some sligthly more frequent updates
Man, writer's block bites, but it was good to see this at long last.
Also seriosuly, Umbra? Not a week since Luna let the cat out of the bag and you're already flaunting your vampiric blood-friend? Publicly no less? 'Oh hai guis, I totally bite this guy, like all the time, despite the fact vamponies are supposed to be taking potions for our needs, not like that's going to make anypony nervous or anything at all.'
Now if this doesn't end with the culprit saying some variation of, "And I would've gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!" then I will be disappoint.
4570598 Correction: "And I would've gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!"And your mangy mutt too!"
And a slight alteration for this story: "And I would've gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling vamponies! And your annoying ape too!"
"Alright gang, here's the plan. I'll go make out with the hot one in a closet and get chased around by the monster for a bit. The smart one will go solve the mystery more or less singlehoofedly, while the two dumb ones will wander off in search of food."
Just spoted and read all in one go. Its nice and refreshing to read a mature stuff with no actuall sex or nsfw material. Like the story and lookinf forward for more.
4570676 "Well gang, it looks like Adolf Hitler was actually Winston Churchill's body double of Princess Celestia's loosely related cousin that works in a shop run by Adolf Hitler! Man! I never woulda guessed!"
4572190 It's the themes man. Plus they're bound to get together. It would be stupid not to, almost like having toast and butter right next to each other and not eating them together
I'm excited to see Anon's reaction to confrontation with Orchid.. That put aside, I'm a bit sad to see this bound shipping with Anon and the Major.. I was expecting the mares to be all over him by now..
Mr. Author sir, one question while I read... How do you pronounce your name? is it like Fugger with the 'u' sounding like 'Uh' or is does the 'u' sound like two 'o's? Like 'Fooger' or 'Fugger'?
4587085 Okay, thank you, for some odd reason, that actually bothered me to the point of asking about it, don't know why though... Oh well, thank you for answering. Such a relief.
I just realized.. They must make horrible guards, one scent of blood turns on feeding frenzy mode lol. Maybe they could channel that excitement into fighting prowess into being good guards, but who knows lol.
Hehe first view
"need" needs adding in between No and to
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Got it. Thank you.
I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS TO COME BACK!
did it take a year... lets see...
well nope ehmm 4 months?
hell yes
this was nice My only hope for the future is that we don't have wait as long. Not to say it isnt wort the wait, but it would be nice with some sligthly more frequent updates
Man, writer's block bites, but it was good to see this at long last.
Also seriosuly, Umbra? Not a week since Luna let the cat out of the bag and you're already flaunting your vampiric blood-friend? Publicly no less? 'Oh hai guis, I totally bite this guy, like all the time, despite the fact vamponies are supposed to be taking potions for our needs, not like that's going to make anypony nervous or anything at all.'
Hooray, it's back!
ECH
Do I sense an implied bit of shipping going on here?
Great chapter, looking forward for another, next year.
nice touch at the end theregood onehehehe
Man its good to see this story get an update. Welcome back
Loved it! Keep on trucking with this story! I'm really loving Umbra so far.
Well, gang, looks like we got another mystery on our hands!
Orchid? Surely not a my massive pony thread crossover.
Wow I totally forgot about this story I'm gonna have to reread all the previous chapter before I get to this one.
Holy fudge nuggets captain, another update!
. . .
I saw, I read, and I liked. Silly bat ponies should always listen to the hairless, bipedal's guts.
Now if this doesn't end with the culprit saying some variation of, "And I would've gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!" then I will be disappoint.
4570598
Correction: "And I would've gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!"And your mangy mutt too!"
And a slight alteration for this story: "And I would've gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling vamponies! And your annoying ape too!"
"Alright gang, here's the plan. I'll go make out with the hot one in a closet and get chased around by the monster for a bit. The smart one will go solve the mystery more or less singlehoofedly, while the two dumb ones will wander off in search of food."
Just spoted and read all in one go. Its nice and refreshing to read a mature stuff with no actuall sex or nsfw material.
Like the story and lookinf forward for more.
4570676 "Well gang, it looks like Adolf Hitler was actually Winston Churchill's body double of Princess Celestia's loosely related cousin that works in a shop run by Adolf Hitler! Man! I never woulda guessed!"
He invoked Murphy's name, he asked for this.
Yes, finally another chapter keep them coming. This is one of the most interesting stories Ive read in a long time.
Finally! I've been wondering if you just gave up altogether. Good to see you're still putting out chapters for this beautiful work of literary art.
This story makes me wonder why it is in the mature section but for now carry on the good work.
That last line had me like
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4572190 It's the themes man. Plus they're bound to get together. It would be stupid not to, almost like having toast and butter right next to each other and not eating them together
4572658 Erm...not like I did that before >.> maybe.... <.< yes.
Let the investigation begin!
...I hope.
Zoinks!
Yay!! It's still going strong!
4573417 I won't call you stupid, but I will say you missed out on a grand adventure full of love and excitement.
Woo!
I'm excited to see Anon's reaction to confrontation with Orchid..
That put aside, I'm a bit sad to see this bound shipping with Anon and the Major.. I was expecting the mares to be all over him by now..
Yay another chapter! Is there anything I can do to help you get the next one out sooner? Maybe a bribe?
Really loving the new chapter. Keep it up
Mr. Author sir, one question while I read... How do you pronounce your name? is it like Fugger with the 'u' sounding like 'Uh' or is does the 'u' sound like two 'o's? Like 'Fooger' or 'Fugger'?
4583010 with the "uh" it makes it sound like "fucker" xD no offence
4574022 Shaggy's voice will forever be remembered. Casey Kasem, RIP you brave soul.
And good job on this story o3o
Feels amazing.
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Exactly how it looks.
I died. XD
4587085 Okay, thank you, for some odd reason, that actually bothered me to the point of asking about it, don't know why though... Oh well, thank you for answering. Such a relief.
:)
Anon bend over the doctor proscribed 20 ml of anal rape
Ruh roh Shaggy and no scooby snacks in sight.
WOE is us.....indeed....nope let continue.
I just realized.. They must make horrible guards, one scent of blood turns on feeding frenzy mode lol. Maybe they could channel that excitement into fighting prowess into being good guards, but who knows lol.