Luna watches the young (to her, at least) pair hold each other through the crack in her personal theater door with a small grin, the film reel held in her magic long forgotten. “I do so love when a plan comes together,” she says to herself. “Don’t you think so private?... Private Apricot?”
Hmm... so Luna is henceforth to be known as Col. Hannibal Smith. I don't think I even have a problem with that...
God damn this is like the third awesome story in a week that I've read that needs a new chapter, and then another, and another, and on and on until the finally.
I think your limiting your potential audience with the mature tag. It's a quaint little story with several sweet moments but no clop. If you're planning to add that in the future, maybe you could follow "University Days" and write it in a separate story with a link or something. I'm normally not a fan of Anon stories (and HiE stories in general) but as far as those stories go, this one isn't bad.
I'm saving this in my tracking-shelf since it seems you like to take your time updating this.
Hey, when will this story continue (not trying to be rude, just curious)? Or is it dead? Also, is that Orcherd character coming back, I liked her story? P.S. You ARE THE BEE!
OH my gosh. this story IS dead. ugh. just my luck. i find a super good story, only to get to the most recent chapter and find out it wasnt recent at all
A lopsided smile grows on your face. “She’s kind of an impulsive scatterbrain, and sometimes doesn't know when to shut up, but I wouldn't have her any other way. That mare’s name?” Albert Einstein
You wanna know the worst part about this chapter?
It ended.
Nice A-Team reference.
Good chapter.
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I second this notion!
YAY NEW CHAPTER! I loved it, cant wait for the next one. thanks for the great read man!
I can't wait another 4 months for the next chapter...
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Ditto... i am greatly looking forward to the next one..... also... it is now confirmed..... Luna is a voyeur
Well, stumbled across this, instantly loved it, and is sad that I'm read up to the latest chapter
That was a awesome &sweet read Iloved it.
This chapter is brimming with good feels and 'awww's. Sweet chapter.
I loved this chapter especially the last part, looking forward to more.
Great chapter. Very sweet. Anon needs to grow a pair and just go for it
Can't tell if mistake or revenge.
Awwwww, their bonding mooment at the end was just precious!
Whew, an update? I like it! Just as awesome, nicely done.
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And no love to the obvious Aladdin reference? For shame.
In all a very good chapter. Thank you.
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Meh. I am only interested in the deets.
AN AWESOME chapter!!!
So When's the next mauling- I mean exciting event!!? xd
Alright, listen here you lil shit.
You didn't have him say "I love magic"? Not even sarcastically? :/
This was good. I liked it.
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*millionth time
Nice chapter
Seeya next year
Hmm... so Luna is henceforth to be known as Col. Hannibal Smith. I don't think I even have a problem with that...
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For some strange reason I just got the notification for your comment.
Someone's been watching The A Team
Yay!!! Thank you for the update!
Love this story.
Excellent update! Love the feels and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
STILL love it!
i love this fic cant wait to see it be finished good work
I finally caught up with this! You've got some serious talent, NoF, I can't wait to see where all these subplots lead. I hope we can see more soon.
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New chapter when?
Yeah that was cool and all but when are they gonna touch buts?
God damn this is like the third awesome story in a week that I've read that needs a new chapter, and then another, and another, and on and on until the finally.
More, soon, PLEASE!
I think your limiting your potential audience with the mature tag. It's a quaint little story with several sweet moments but no clop. If you're planning to add that in the future, maybe you could follow "University Days" and write it in a separate story with a link or something. I'm normally not a fan of Anon stories (and HiE stories in general) but as far as those stories go, this one isn't bad.
I'm saving this in my tracking-shelf since it seems you like to take your time updating this.
Another fic to my "probably dead" book shelf.
Hey, when will this story continue (not trying to be rude, just curious)? Or is it dead? Also, is that Orcherd character coming back, I liked her story? P.S. You ARE THE BEE!
It was interesting while it lasted. Another actually decent HiE story that's dead...
Is.. Is it dead? *pokes it with a stick*
Please continue this
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XD.
OH my gosh. this story IS dead. ugh. just my luck. i find a super good story, only to get to the most recent chapter and find out it wasnt recent at all
Dat roofie.
Wow, loved this. A mature fic that's pretty maturely written. <3
I died for a while... a good, long while...