Noice Can't believe I was skeptical about this, this is bloody awesome I like the romance development in this, kinda reminds me of Angel Beats though, just without the vampyrism Love it, want to read more
Just a side-not, I don't need to wonder what it's like having girls fight over me......not as fun as you'd think.
Hungry guard? Heh, more like a vampire of any sort. It can't possibly remain a secret that his human blood is like high octane jet fuel compared to the vat-grown swill the rest of the vamponies have to drink. Add to that the fact he can't be turned no matter how much he gets bitten. It's a win-win situation all around... well, except for Anon. (Sheep living amongst the wolves? Yeah, that's not gonna end well)
I still wonder if it's a conflict of interests that the very guard protecting him is the one feeding off him? Still, I suppose that just compels Umbra to make sure he's not jumped by a bunch of vamponies and drained to death in a feeding frenzy. If she was really concerned about his VIP status, she would have him chipped (or whatever the magic equivalent is) so when he gets kidnapped, he can be tracked down. It's only a matter of time before somepony gets so hungry for human blood that even the threat of Umbra won't keep them at bay.
Never in my life have I wanted a fictional human to make love with a vampiric bat-pony, with possible fetishism on the vampiric part. But(t) damn, I guess there's a first time for everything.
Yay! Update! Why am I so late reviewing?? Meh, I dunno Anyway, I thought this chapter was positively hilarious! Then again it's just you're writing style that I find so enjoyable. 'Three busses and a tank'
Interesting story this is, I am liking it the more I read on, this is looking to be a good one. I just now noticed the view count, whew... and the like/dislike ratio...
You sir, made my day.
Nice, wonder if she's gonna regret leaving that weakness in her armor.
emerald green eyes in the dark huh? it's probably some hungry-ass guard who wants some human blood.
HOW ABOUT YES?
i like this one
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or this
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and this one
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were we supposed to read the convo at the end?
DOOO EEET!
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I'm so happy to see this update again
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A stalker? Now things are getting good.
Finally, an update. You just can't keep us hanging like that. It's good to see you back.
An update after quite some time!!! More!!! xD
Three busses and a tank you say? Anybody up for idea pancakes? (Yeah that was bad. I'll go back to my corner now.)
I wonder who those green eyes belong to...
I think that this should be just "armor".
Noice
Can't believe I was skeptical about this, this is bloody awesome I like the romance development in this, kinda reminds me of Angel Beats though, just without the vampyrism
Love it, want to read more
Just a side-not, I don't need to wonder what it's like having girls fight over me......not as fun as you'd think.
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Got it. Thanks.
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Not really. I forgot to take it out earlier. Don't worry though, it's not like you were missing anything, just me and my proofer talking.
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Hungry guard? Heh, more like a vampire of any sort. It can't possibly remain a secret that his human blood is like high octane jet fuel compared to the vat-grown swill the rest of the vamponies have to drink. Add to that the fact he can't be turned no matter how much he gets bitten. It's a win-win situation all around... well, except for Anon. (Sheep living amongst the wolves? Yeah, that's not gonna end well)
I still wonder if it's a conflict of interests that the very guard protecting him is the one feeding off him? Still, I suppose that just compels Umbra to make sure he's not jumped by a bunch of vamponies and drained to death in a feeding frenzy. If she was really concerned about his VIP status, she would have him chipped (or whatever the magic equivalent is) so when he gets kidnapped, he can be tracked down. It's only a matter of time before somepony gets so hungry for human blood that even the threat of Umbra won't keep them at bay.
Loved the new chapter man, keep up the good work!
Yes....just yes
Never in my life have I wanted a fictional human to make love with a vampiric bat-pony, with possible fetishism on the vampiric part.
But(t) damn, I guess there's a first time for everything.
Great! Can't wait for much!
First thing I thought of was this:
awesome
Yay! Update! Why am I so late reviewing?? Meh, I dunno Anyway, I thought this chapter was positively hilarious! Then again it's just you're writing style that I find so enjoyable. 'Three busses and a tank'
Oh man I love this!
This fic is positively one of the best i read in a while. Cant wait to see how you will further develop the characters .
I like it, but for some reason...
I don't like Umbra that much.
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK NOW I NEED TO DO THE WAITING PART! GODS OF AWESOME MAKE THE WAITING SHORT AND PAINLESS!!!!!!
THE WAITING.... THE ETERNAL WAITING.
this is getting good
These might just be the cuddliest vampires ever.
3076276 Seems like I'm not the only one willing to give her a flashbang as a present.
Three busses and a tank.
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ow my sides
ow my everything
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Is that Revenger Mordred?
I think you mean,
She can`t remember what she had for breakfast when there are only two possibilities. ...Seems legit.
Interesting story this is, I am liking it the more I read on, this is looking to be a good one.
I just now noticed the view count, whew... and the like/dislike ratio...
Good shit!
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Definitely not. I've not warmed up to her yet.