• Member Since 5th Jun, 2013
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My name is Daisy Jacobs. When you're alone most of the time and the few friends you have turn on you, your parents abandon you with a witch of a foster mother and self loathing becomes a hobby, you get me. I can't remember the last time a friend, or even another human being tried to make contact with me that wasn't hate through a computer or muttered comments as I walk past in the school corridors. After years of lonliness and bullying, I decided enough was enough and escaped my town to find else-where to go. Anywhere but there. That's when I some-how managed to find myself an entire other universe, with an entire other species and an entire other life. A new me. It may seem all fun and games, but believe me, it wasn't what I expected at ALL. Although the 'Friendship is magic' side of things seems pretty accurate.

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This has potential, and I can't wait for more.

Still, its rough and you could use some help with writing, try joining authors helping authors and school for new writers. Get your fic up on those groups, it'll help quite a bit.

I wish you the best of luck

~Dark Parable, teller of tales of a questionable nature.

WORD-WAAAAALL:pinkiegasp: come back when you have separated your paragraphs

"HI IM A HOOMAN ND MEH SO RLY SADZ ND ST00FZ ND LIIEK I WNT 2 SOOSIDE BCUZ MAH LIEF IS POOPEH. OH NAOW IM IN EQESTRYA ND PONYS MAEK MAH LIEF RLY GUD ND IM SOOPER HAPPEH NAOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

2770914 Aw thankyou so much for the feedback! I'm really new to this website and obviously an amateur writer, so I'm just warming to how things work right now :twilightsmile:

~Puppet

Nice to see you back in the saddle, and I like the new profile pic you're sporting. Not read the new chapter yet, my feed just let me know it was put up XD
Looking forward to it, so it's probably next up in my queue.

And now for something completely different... A haiku!

Five syllables here
Seven form the second line here
And once again five.

Tuddah!

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