Whatever happened to Nightmare Moon? What if the elements of harmony didn't destroy her? That's what this group of friends will soon find out. How will this change them? Will the change be for the better or for worse? And how do they end up doing what the Elements themselves couldn't do?
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There shouldn't be a capital here.
There should be a quotation mark after the 'Maybe I can fix it'.
Should be it's.
There might be more but I'm too lazy to check again.
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Thanks for pointing those out. I thought i combed through this well enough but i looked over it as soon as i posted it and same these mistakes too...
I find really hard to be immerged in a Pony story when the various Ponies doesn't have pony names. Kidd , Evan or Kristoph are not really lore-friendly ponies names.
There is no backstory or descriptions for the various characters too, I really have the feeling to read a fiction with humans, wich got badly ponified just to pass moderation.
2951161 This is a story made by me and some friends of mine, I had them choose their own names. And besides "Evan" is just a nickname he prefers to be called. But besides that In chapters that are coming soon I'm giving a bit more of a back story to the main characters. I'm sorry my writing doesn't suit you though. But thank you for voicing your opinion so i may improve and address certain issues.