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In the not so distant future 12 colts and 12 mares will fight to the death over a period of 7 weeks. One can win, be crowed Victor. Winning will make you famous, losing means certain death! "May the odds be EVER in your favor." When 12 year old Daisy volunteeres for her best friend Fluttershy when her name is drawn at the reaping, she see's it as a way to keep her safe. But young Daisy is rebelious, and this will not stop the fact that the capital Canterlot must held responsable for her perants death. No matter what the personal cost!

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Spellcheckers. Use them.

'volunteeres' is not a word, nor are 'rebelious' or 'responsable'.

Thanks, I do use a spell check obviously not a very good one. :derpytongue2: sorry but thanks for the heads up!!! :pinkiesmile:
There's also some errors in the authors notes but I can't fix them on the iPad I'm on, will try to do it on my laptop later!

I like it so far! I love how Daisy is such a rebel, she's a pretty awesome character. Keep up the good work! :raritywink:

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