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ShadowBlaze (Behemoth)


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Vinyl Scratch and Silent Beat have been best friends for as long as they can remember. But after one too many drinks, Scratch opens up to Beat and shares her true feelings for him. Silent Beat soon finds himself falling for Octavia as well. Torn between two ponies, Beat tries to care for them both. Please criticize in anyway you want. Cover art by my good friend, EndlessPrisms. First fic.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 21 )

I can't wait to see the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:

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Ah, thank you. I'll do some editing. :twilightblush:
And yeah. I think your suggestion works much better.. :twilightsmile:

before i start reading, thanks for the wallpaper :twilightsmile:

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:rainbowlaugh: No problem! Gotta love Tavia/ Scratch wallpapers. :rainbowkiss:

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Greatest praise I could possibly receive, Rusion. Thank you so much for sticking with me. :yay:

Great story, really am enjoying it so far. First chapter could have been a bit longer, but meh it's still an excellent story.

Thanks again for using my picture as the cover, and good luck on your magnificent fic. :twilightsmile:

Love the use of pictures. :twilightsmile:

Got yourself a track. Hating myself for postponing reading this.

:rainbowlaugh: "You mena like these?" Fixed! Thank you. Never would have spotted them :facehoof:

Oh lerd, the lingering feels at the end.

Man Beats is in a hard place right now! :unsuresweetie: I love this story and your writing style, and I really really really want you to keep working on it even if it takes you forever. Thanks you so much and looking forward to the updates. :pinkiesmile:

Hmm. Pity this hasn't been updated in a while. Definitely worth continuing.

I have to say the relationship part of the story moved waaaaaaaaaytooholycowfast. Really could use a bit more time in-between and perhaps some more descriptions, to help with pacing. That was the main thing that threw me this chapter.

Nonetheless, worth a Thumbs up and a fav!

I hope he contimues this series

Hey I got an idea for the story! UPDATE IT!!! PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU!

Oh,wow that was a cold shoulder,I think my heart just slowed a bit,ok bro that's a major cliffhanger,and
Not to rush you or anything because EPICNESS is not rushed it is perfected but holy dubstep this needs an update

Hoah dear, Hold on there, This made me smile almost immediately, as I saw the Reader's nickname was Beats. This had caught my eye since I have an OC named Dread Beats, Whom's nickname is either Beats or Techno.... What a Cliché, Right?

This actually made me cry. The events that led up to this. Actually made me cry. The cold shoulder that Silent Beats had gave. Just killed me. Good job on the work! It's so sad and breathtaking, you didn't expect such an ending to this. :fluttercry: :fluttercry: :fluttercry: :fluttercry:

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