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DaemoN67

DaemoN67 #1 · May 28th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Stephen Writes, a unicorn census pony aiding the princess with all the new and current residents all across Equestria, along with his best friend.

That sentence is incomplete. When I see sentences like this in the description, it doesn't make me want to read your story for fear it has grammar issues.

Commissar Rarity

Commissar Rarity #2 · May 28th, 2013 · · 1 ·

I wrote a short little review but then I reached the end of the chapter and was disgusted by the foalcon. Thanks for the warning.

Also:

This story take my OC's POV and it taken way back.

What does that even mean??

Soad24k

Soad24k #3 · May 29th, 2013 · · ·

2644347Yeah, sorry. I kinda forgot about the foalcon ending. Also, this was done years ago. I'll fix that.

Soad24k

Soad24k #4 · May 29th, 2013 · · ·

2643820 I"ll fix that too.

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