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Of Ponies And Pelicans

Usually things go very smoothly when the birds come back, but this time they are mad.
No more passive resistance, they're out to kick some butt.

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Rainbow87dash

Rainbow87dash #1 · May 1st, 2013 · · ·

All that... And they just crapped on a cart?

MR.KUMQUAT

MR.KUMQUAT #2 · May 1st, 2013 · · ·

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Not a fan of anticlimaxes?

Rainbow87dash

Rainbow87dash #3 · May 1st, 2013 · · ·

2511104 no not really, their kind of.. Anticlimactic

Sausagefanclub

Sausagefanclub #4 · May 29th, 2013 · · ·

2511104
I loved it. Anticlimaxes can be hilarious if done right, like this.
All that buildup to a scene that would make you think the birds are complete monsters, but instead they're just a bunch of mediocre jerks.

Also:

"So they are angry birds?"
"Yes, and they want revenge."

I see what you did there.

MR.KUMQUAT

MR.KUMQUAT #5 · Jun 4th, 2013 · · ·

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Glad to know that somebody liked it. I haven't written anything for a time now, but seeing this comment makes me think about starting again. Thank you.