• Published 29th Apr 2013
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CHANGING LIVE - prince cosmos



A teenager gets transported to Ponyville after a freak accident but how is it going to end

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Comments ( 15 )

That escalated quickly.

You spelled 'many' wrong in the description.

so manny chapters

Are they all gonna get pregnant at once?

Ewwww... More Bad Things....

2502329 she means he banged all the elements:raritystarry::twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::rainbowkiss: except Fluttershy who went dominatrix on him :flutterrage:

2515106 whats wrong with it i kinda think dominatrix fluttershy is funny

2515542 oh nothing I just use that face for better reference

2515542 oh nothing I just use that face for better reference

Surfing through stories, sees story that doesn't even take the time to properly capitalize the title, leaves comment about it, leaves.

2690139 is it a problem if a tittle is not capitalized

2690180

To me it says that you couldn't be bothered to spend a second to capitalize two letters. It looks unprofessional and I always tend to avoid stories that do something like that.

It's in the same category to me as having spelling mistakes in the description. (Which you have one which had been previously pointed out and not fixed.)

Obviously this is all my own personal thoughts on it but, I wouldn't doubt that there are others who think the same way.

Are you cerceral right now the rocket count down? I have lost all faith for three seconds

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