Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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Okay, this is a little experiment I would like to start with the FoE and Post-Fall communities.

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Hi every pony, I have a big problem. The problem is that when I submit stories, they’re never proofread for grammatical and spelling errors. And that’s bad, for me at least. If you want to proofread my latest book-in-the making, this is required:

1) Trustworthiness.
2) If you’re at a HS level or higher.
3) If your compatibility is perfectly synced with your proofreading.
And number 4) Good at keeping passwords hidden.

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Time to watch the new stories list...

For manslaughter.

Kidding!

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This is only a first attempt. I might provide a different version at a later point in time.

Done with inkarnate.

This is a scene from chapter 2~! I made a transitioning GIF of this go to my blog to view

I was able to convince Arctikfox to allow me to write about a Spirit that will be in story. Akia will appear somewhere in the next few chapters.

I just saw TheSleeplessOne's blog post on the upcoming AU arcs. For the sake of the reader's and balance's sake, I shall give you a hint at what Applejack will face in her world.

Duty, truth, and determination
Are the stalwart Apple's traits.
To what's right without hesitation,
And to banish false constraints.
The Apple does what must be done
With goodness at her heart,
But if ill and ill is all to come
The question is where to start.
What must be done, it must be done,

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I'm just about ready to publish Shattered Rainbow, but I'm thinking that I'd might as well have as many weeds pulled as I possibly could before it goes up, taking to account that I've been planning out the story and its associated world for the past few months.

So how about it? I provide the story link and the unpublished view password, y'all preread it, then it gets published with all tweaks included.

I finished the Shattered Rainbow side of the next scene, now to write out the Equestrian Human side of things.

And this may or may not be only the first encounter that the two stories may have with each other...

The next bonus chapter for Shattered Mirror is here. Be warned, dark shit ahead...

Yeah, you know my story Shattered Diamond? I'm sorry everyone, but I've just lost heart for writing it anymore. I don't know why, maybe it's because despite all of it's flaws, I like the original better, or maybe it's because just that since I've got so much else going on story wise, rewriting two stories at once isn't something I'm beginning to enjoy. Honestly, I don't know. But all the same, I'm removing the story from the site for the time being until inspiration strikes me or I start to

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On the horizon of a distant galaxy, I see a world where the normal is taboo. Some friendships never existed. Some ponies never attained the power they deserved. Some scorned souls enact their revenge in the most twisted ways...

Stay tuned for my tale of a Shattered Reality...

EEquestrian Human

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Comedy
• Sci-Fi

A filly once lived in a lab. That lab happened to be on Earth. She wanted to go home. She never knew what to expect.

• Human
• Alt. Universe
• OC
• Other

TheMajorTechie · 17k words  ·  24  8 · 881 views

EShattered Rainbow

• MLP: FiM
• Sad
• Slice of Life

Rainbow Dash: The filly that never had a chance.

• Fluttershy
• Rainbow Dash
• Other

TheMajorTechie · 8.8k words  ·  27  3 · 894 views

The latest chapters in both stories are different perspectives of the same scene. Enjoy!

https://www.strawpoll.me/15968001

Okay, first off sorry it took me so long to get to work on this, but I've had my mind occupied by my other multi-chapter stories. (I'm looking at you Going Deep Under and The Magic of... Music?) Anyways, the point is I'm finally getting on the ball for it, and if all goes well, it should be released in a few days. Here's the basic description to hopefully generate some excitement:

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I was so worried about screwing up at the Shattered Kingdom panel. I had no idea I was going to sit up front with them. The people loved it though. Hopefuly next year we will have a less glichy build. Our project leader is currently "recruiting" people who are experts with RPG maker. If anyone is interested, contact Gremiln Greninaide or Shattered Kingdom via social media. I'll be sure to post the recording of the panel here for anyone who's interested in the game or me up on stage.

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Okay, so as a favor to a friend, and a personal challenge to myself, I offered Fourshadow up a heroic version of "Under Our Spell" for his story linked below. And this is the finished product. Thoughts and comments are appreciated.

EA Shattered Rainbow Rock

• Equestria Girls
• Adventure
• Drama

In another dimension, Sunset Shimmer and the Rainbooms are now sending fear and panic to the students of CHS. But maybe three sisters may put an end to that...

• Alt. Universe
• Other
• Sunset Shimmer
• Dazzlings
• Main 7 (EqG)

FourShadow · 88k words  ·  189  14 · 5k views

Now here you go...

[The Dazzlings]

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

You didn't know that you fell

Oh-whoa-oh, oh-whoa-oh

[Adagio Dazzle]

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