I fell off-track. Shut up.
College is made of fuck. I missed a lot of Doctor Who, lots of pony, lots of other weekly shows I've been trying to get BACK into... the only reason I'm still following Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. so rigidly is because I still HAVE the channel it airs on and set an alarm for when it airs.
YAKS SMASH SPOILERS!
Ahem. After 'Princess Spike,' it's great to see an episode where the humour works so well. Where we got some very nice in-character writing and excellent timing. My only bones to pick are that once again Spike gets slammed by a door, and the Yaks blew up at everything possible. Here I think the writers could have either used the Rule of Three or had the Yaks show silent disapproval until something bigger makes them SMASH.
Well, it has been done for a while now, but this has been my longest chapter in "Elements" to date. I was honestly trying to cut it back twice now (once in the previous chapter "The Flameout"), but I found I needed to cover alot within the two chapters anyway... so, yeah.
In any case, next chapter will be up next week, and the final chapter of Part 5 will be done and up by the week after.
Has It been a week already, since I started reporting my progress? Wow!
Ever since near the start of this year, aka Saturday January 4th, 2020, a DeviantArt user by the name of 13mcjunkinm has been doing Artwork scenes of my TG TF stories via as requests from me. Now as of today, aka Thursday November 12th, 2020 (aka the 10th Anniversary day of when Unstoppable was first shown in theaters in the USA), it has been completed.
... Another year has been spent on this fun little site... CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE!
That’s right. Though the series has ended, and the fandom has waned, I’m going to stick around through the thick of it (and hope that the inbetween comedy series and Gen 5 is a worthy follow-up to FiM), and continue to write and produce new stories and chapters.
In fact, I may have a chapter or two ready by the time Hearth’s Warming/Christmas rolls on in. No promises, though.
This episode was obvious pandering to the fans – and that was before they put a ringed panda monster in the episode. Features of the episode include cameos by every major background pony, Derpy speaking, Doctor Whooves actually getting a personality, Steven Magnet’s long-awaited return, and ponies who are totally best friends and not lovers.
Seriously.
Really.
But I think it came at the expense of the plot.
Incoherent Plot
Rarity: "Stop the presses! It's Wednesday evening! Mike Cartoon Pony is posting another blog on unused Season 5 episodes! Forget these dresses for a client coming in an hour, this is The. Most. Important. Thing!"
Starlight: "Oh, I'm sorry, MLP writers, was that archival freezing beam meant for my backstory? Yeah, no, we're not doing that. Looks like you just tossed out all the plot setup across this season's map episodes! What a shame…"
Spike: "This thing again, huh? Going right in with the episodes locked to a formula, I see."
Applejack: "Wow Spike, that's mighty insightful of ya. How'd you deduce that so quick?"
Yup! It's the final one, and honestly, I think it's my absolute favorite. It has everything! Show accuracies, lore, action, a little bit of comedy and insults being slung, and the juggling of many characters! I hope I kept everyone in-character for this event.
The second meetin gof Equestrians and Tomb Kings begins, but will it go smoothly?
The next chapter is out now following a bit of a re-write, Thank you for your patience and I hope you enjoy it.
That wasn't even Angel's final form.
My initial thoughts on the finale episode with special guest The Marefriend, who shares a personal story about how important friendships can be.
Spoiler bells, spoiler bells, spoilers go away!
It's another winter holiday episode before a fall episode. What is up with time in Equestria? Or perhaps airing times. The mid-season hiatus knocked a few things on, and other things off: perfect timing for the 5th anniversary, but the seasonal stuff got whacked pretty hard. Not as hard as the stinger in Friendship Games, though.
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