Revamped and Refreshed! · 12:41am Jul 14th, 2021
Welcome welcome everypony! I have some very exciting news today about a specific story of mine called,
Welcome welcome everypony! I have some very exciting news today about a specific story of mine called,
The editing process is: reading out loud, realizing it sounds like shit when it's outside your head, and making changes.
I think now that I've written six chapters I have a grasp on what's happening, so I'm gonna go back and try to make my story less fucky to behold. 1 and 2 are significantly better I think, but idk yet. I'll wait and see.
That's all.
As it says on the title, I just finished some rewrites on Small Town Life, specifically Episode 17 - Meet the Parents, which was a MAJOR change at Sunny's mother's announcement of her retirement, and some edits on Short 4 and a few episodes after that.
So... I was thinking and musing... And after some brainstorming, I thought of something. The most critique I got for these four pesky chapters (and their pesky dog). What was/is missing was/is a counterbalance to Tyler. Someone expendable who could disappear at one point in time once the story continues. Over the next few months I'm going to make some changes to the first four chapters of Book One in order to implement a character retroactively. He will be gone by the
So, good news, I've made some pretty decent progress these last two weeks. I've finished the chapter with Vinyl and have now started on the next in which Twilight and her friends have there first clash with demons alongside the Order.
I've made a commitment to myself to get in at least two hours of writing a day, so progress should continue at a steady pace from here on out.
As the title says Eternal shadows has been rewritten and is back. Hopefully you all enjoy it.
Hello my dedicated readers and writers, and friends alike! Today, or whenever you read this, is going to probably shake your very being! First off I want to apologize in advance for what this blog post is about. I can see and hear your 'boos' and see the dislikes countinung already, but bear with me please. Student of Friendship is going to be redone. What does this mean?
Why it'e elementary my dear friends.
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Hello again.
I'm back with another update.
I'm happy to say that progress has been picking back up since the previous update, slowly, very slowly, but there is still a measurable degree of progress being made. I'm currently about half way through Vinyl's introductory chapter and working through to an epic fight scene.
Yeah, I don't really have much to say this time around. I've been trying to rework my schedule to get in more writing time, but it's been a little difficult.
So... I dont like my latest chapter of Gryphon Six. I'm really thinking of re writing the last half of the story. And making the story more linear, with a definite if not clear waypoint. I agree with some of my critics, this story should be a little more focused, and I have a more defined story. Sorry to take up your time. Azure Nights out.
Well, well, well...
Long time no see. It certainly has been a long while, hasn't it?
This is my first blog post and first recent activity in a while, as there has been this itch in the back of my head to come back to both FIMFiction and FanFiction overall. It doesn't usually happen like that unless I have a great idea cycling through my mind like the story "Learning To Live" had been for a few years until its completion.
Inspired by the my little pony comics reflection, celestia and mirror sombra/good sombra have a romantic night. Eleven months later, celestia gives birth to a foil unicorn with her coat plus eye colors with good sombra's mane color. Still working on it. Haven't even decided if he ends up with twilight or rarity. But he's just one of three original characters.
How would the later seasons of MLP FiM have turned out if Starlight Glimmer never reformed?
What if she either doubled down on her equality philosophy, or revealed she simply used Our Town as a means to an end to gain power?
How would you have changed MLP FiM to make it a more interesting show? Any changes to the Mane 6, background characters, setting, worldbuilding, etc?
What changes would you have made to certain seasons of the actual show itself? Would you want to adapt certain IDW comics into episode plots?
So this has been on my mind for a couple of days now.
I wanted to do a rewrite of C&C:ED since I wanted to try and do things differently, but that mean I’ll basically cancel the current version of the story and I really don’t want my experience to be all “cancelled stories”.
So what do you guys think, rewrite or not?