Project Redux

So... I was thinking and musing... And after some brainstorming, I thought of something. The most critique I got for these four pesky chapters (and their pesky dog). What was/is missing was/is a counterbalance to Tyler. Someone expendable who could disappear at one point in time once the story continues. Over the next few months I'm going to make some changes to the first four chapters of Book One in order to implement a character retroactively. He will be gone by the time of chapter 7 and will receive a few mentions here and there. The update will be in one sweep to avoid confusion. So once I am done, I will make the changes and call it a day. Hopefully this will calm the majority of critics.

Comments

[Chillean]

Interesting, I look forward to seeing what the changes do for it!