Book 3 Chapter 2 ending rewritten · 1:10pm Jun 7th, 2021
I was reading through the comments lately and read the comment of Tenth. At the time I originally wrote the chapter, I deemed it a better idea to do this in order to establish something between AJ and Tyler, since he has something special with each of his herd mates, so why not being the submissive one to her.
However, after reading that comment again, I had no choice but to agree with Tenth. This was out of character for each of them and thus the idea was scrapped today.
Tyler's punishment was altered to a solitary confinement for one hour in the waking world, stretched by Luna to an entire year. I originally wanted to make this 20 years, but he didn't kill anyone or something, he just withheld information from them regarding himself. A year is sufficient. No hunger, no thirst, no bodily need. Just solitude.