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Jazzmania Chronicle


I'm just somepony who wants to finish a story. I hope you enjoy the ride along with me!

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Jul
29th
2017

ATTENTION: UPDATE ON PROLOGUE!!! · 6:52pm Jul 29th, 2017

It's not really an update. I just added a sentence in one paragraph in the "Forever Inferno" prologue. I forgot to mention something and wanted to add it before I forgot.

*BOLDED IS NEW*

He began to hyperventilate as this man – this creature – crouched down in front of him, the two now staring at eye-level. He had no skin on his face whatsoever, just pure flame and bone. Several cracks scarred his flaming skull, one of them in the form of a jagged “V”. The stallion was so engrossed by the sight that he wasn’t prepared when the man’s gloved fist suddenly connected with his face, his nose crushing on impact. He screamed in agony as blood spilled out of his newly ruined nostrils. The man hit him again, this time in the stomach. The stallion gagged, the wind suddenly knocked out of him.

I also changed some stuff in chapter one. Just minor changes; switched the phrases "five years" to "six years", and vice-versa. And I also extended the fight scene between Jaxlynn and the Ghost Rider at the end of chapter one. Check it out when you all get the chance. I'll keep you guys updated!

Thanks.

~Jazi out!

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