Waiting for the damn book to end already. Notice something different about the chapter title? For the next ten or so chapters, the book’s narrated by Jacob instead of Bella. And if he’s anything like he was at the end of Eclipse, this is going to be painful. VERY. VERY. PAINFUL.
There’s a “preface” for this section, too. This is it, in its entirety:
Just wanted to give you all a very quick update on things. In my last blog post I mentioned some IRL troubles (nothing super serious anymore, just some stuff I needed to figure out), and I’m happy to report that they’ve all been mostly taken care of.
It’s been a long time coming (almost a month and a half, really), but chapter 10 is finally ready for release sometime tomorrow. It’s the final major lore/world-building chapter of the story, and afterwards the plot will kick into high gear. World-building and lore will of course still happen, but it’ll be far more subtle.
I have decided that I have trouble focusing on a single story for long periods of time which leads to me forgetting a few things so I am planning to work on all four stories at the same time each story will try to be updated every two weeks.
sadly all four stories are 10+ chapters long especially Fallout Equestria Brave Dawn and Eternal Shadows which are gonna be the longest.
so hopefully I don't kill myself trying to do too much.
Hey guys! So with Arc 1 having finished up and me taking a little break from the main storyline, it's going to be a little bit before the next chapter arrives. So, I decided in the meantime to share the 'beta' stages of Ballad of the Dawn with you guys. These were the chapters that I submitted to EqD when NaPoWriMo 2017 concluded. I ended up padding out the first arc a lot, and nearly gutted chapter 4 (now chapter 8 and 9). So if you want to figure out how it all started,
Hello and welcome to a new blog post in a long time. I hope you all remember who I am and what it is I am working on. I've been here a few times only to notice that nobody/nopony responded to my last post about Luster Dawn being in my fanfiction story. So even if you all don't say anything, I will have to go along with this decision. This means I will have to pick up the pace and really start working on my story. I've been slacking off for far too long and now it's time I keep my promise! I
We go back to Bella’s perspective right as she vomits blood. We get a brief recap of what she saw from the last chapter, only with a lot of descriptions of pain. Bella manages to cling to consciousness long enough to see (blalgh) Renesmee before blacking out.
Edward and Carlisle are unable to find Irina, so they let the matter drop. Days go by with nothing bad happening, so the Cullens decide to go about business as usual. But one day, while arranging some vases, Alice gets a vision so shocking that she drops one: the Volturi are coming for the Cullens. All of them. They’ll be arriving in about a month. Because there’s so many of them, it can’t just be to check up on Bella’s current life/undeath status; it’s about Nessie. When Irina saw Nessie
Jacob, Leah, and Seth run another patrol around the Cullen house, and I feel like I’ve said something along those lines twenty times in the past eight chapters. Leah awkwardly thanks Jacob for putting up with her and promises to try to not get on his nerves. They do nothing of consequence for nine pages and this book is so padded a La-Z-Boy factory would find it excessive. Eventually, Leah speaks up again:
Ok, so I'm back, sorry needed to figure out a schedule around a new born. His birth was crazy, he's actually a tumor baby, so he gets a removal day cake, and if you get that joke, thank you for being just as fucked up as I am. Anyways, for those who don't know which is all of you I', a junior, my son is a 3rd hopefully he'll want to pass down our name and so forth and so on, until my name is the only name. That is my master world domination plan. A bit long term but hey it's more reasonable
Since a lot of people seem to get the wrong idea of the whole “Superior… Inferior” thing about my Starfleet ponies, I post this to try and clear it up.
Firstly, people keep thinking or just ignorantly misjudge that Starfleet bully the Equestrians and rub in their faces…
“We are superior to you, and you are pathetic inferior wusses”
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