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Feb
5th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #39 — The Last King · 8:29pm Feb 5th, 2020

Jan
2nd
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #35 — The Joy Hive · 6:17am Jan 2nd, 2020

Dec
27th
2019

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #34 — She Kills Monsters · 12:57am Dec 27th, 2019

Mar
31st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #3 · 9:42am Mar 31st, 2016

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

Today, we look at a set of stories, based solely on their descriptions, titles, and other relevant paratext.

The Alicorn Curse by chillbook1
http://i.imgur.com/BAtZIgd.png

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Jan
25th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #18 — Bitter-Sweetie · 7:41am Jan 25th, 2016

Jun
6th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #27 — Palimpsest · 11:17pm Jun 6th, 2016

Jan
21st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #16 — So You've Just Slept With Your Best Friend · 12:42am Jan 21st, 2016

Aug
25th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #7 — Lost and Never Found · 3:10am Aug 25th, 2015

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Today’s story relies on not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is incredibly blunt, I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.


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Oct
31st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #12 — Just A Simple Story · 8:28pm Oct 31st, 2015

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I don’t like catering to holidays, but here’s a review for Halloween anyway. Any time is a good time to review Dark fic.


Title: Just A Simple Story

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Jan
23rd
2016

Taking Review Requests [CLOSED] · 11:36am Jan 23rd, 2016

If [OPEN], I am accepting new requests. If [CLOSED], I am working on other things (check back later :twilightsmile:)

If you follow me, then you are likely aware of my ongoing review series. In order to mix things up a little, I am now taking requests for stories to review. Like everything in life, there are some caveats:
*Only request reviews for one of your own stories.

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Jan
25th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #37 — Sister Solstice · 11:39am Jan 25th, 2020

Nov
21st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #1 · 1:18am Nov 21st, 2015

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

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Feb
15th
2016

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #4 · 10:03am Feb 15th, 2016

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

It Must Be Tuesday by Foals Errand (based off chapter 1 only):

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Dec
30th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #29 — The Mage and the Filly Fair · 6:31am Dec 30th, 2016

Sep
1st
2015

The problem with Stripes · 2:08am Sep 1st, 2015

While my big "flagship" story fan fiction thingymadoo hasn't even begun to come close to the point at which I can hype it with blogs, I still feel like my first one should be relevant to it. Specifically, the reason why I don't make much progress on it.

Oh no, an author with basically zero fame and/or credibility has a problem! How tragic!

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Apr
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #25 — Dash Academy (Webcomic) · 5:20am Apr 24th, 2016

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At the time of this review, the story is on the final chapter, but not complete.


Title: Dash Academy (also hosted on the user’s deviantart page)

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Jul
19th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #3 — Lies to Foals · 12:37am Jul 19th, 2015

Jan
28th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #20 — The Savage Way · 10:20am Jan 28th, 2016

Jan
7th
2017

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #7 · 10:38pm Jan 7th, 2017

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

"Applejack, Are We Poor?" by InsertAuthorHere:

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Mar
11th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #41 — In the Moon’s Platinum Glow · 8:08am Mar 11th, 2020

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