For a breakdown of the format, don't forget to check the first entry.
Title: Of Angels
Author: PaulAsaran
Short summary: Angel Bunny learns to write from Twilight, for a reason that quickly becomes obvious. Told through letters/written conversations.
For today’s critique, I thought I would try something different. Rather than reading a new story, I took a story I had previously “reviewed” (by leaving a comment on it), and then rework that comment into a proper critique.
And so we return to Equestria for the final stretch. And, as with the first half of this season, they feel the need to remind us of that in the episode title. Good thing this is a Pinkie episode; between this and the last Bronycon, it’s enough to make anyone feel a little melancholy.
Hey everypony, and welcome to the best month of the year!
It's about time for another update to start off our spooky month; sadly, life has really gotten in the way of writing since I last posted a blog. Save for Stalled Out's most recent part, I haven't finished anything I'd deem fitting to publish. Lots of things happened and are continuing to occur IRL that sap my time, ability, and drive to write. I don't normally talk about my personal life here much, but I'll share the short version:
Rather appropriate to have a diarch-focused episode so close to a solstice. Let’s see what night and day get up to while Twilight’s trying to fill all eight hipposandals at once
Greetings MetaVerse fans!
Here’s a roundup of what we’ve got going on this month!
Comic
We had our first poll for the comic!
The fans have spoken it seems and the comic will focus on the fanfiction itself!
Alright, here it is! This is the sneak peak for chapter 19. Keep in mind that I'm still making changes (as well as writing it) so there's likely going to be things changed around when it's actually posted.
Password is still the same: Madeyoulook
Alright, till I actually update this fucking Lazuras of a story.
Gosh, it's been an interesting two weeks.
In terms of good news, I got a chapter of Hourglass posted, cementing myself into a monthly update schedule! I don't think I've ever been this proud to be this pathetic. Hopefully when the story picks up, so will my schedule. Hopefully. Fingers crossed.
This week, I had a choice between a group of EqG shorts with Halloween content or a pair of comics with Halloween content. I went with the latter, since the spookery would make up a larger percentage of the total reviewed material, especially when it turned out there was enough to work with in just that issue! Let’s begin.
So ask me things plx.