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Yay. One more good chapter to one good story
Remember, children. Oracles work best at predicting the future when you curse them.
update? Update! Yess, this completes me!
Thank Celestia you're still around Somber. Never stop being awesome!!
Hello, Somber. Nice to see you again. Most wonderful chapter. Now, I'm going to have to go back and reread.
This is going to get ugly... (as if it is not ugly already)
Jinx it? Possible. I doubt it, though.
Thanks for the chapter.
New chapter! Scotch is starting to channel some black jack level badassness
dude youre still around! i was beginning to think you left the fandom.
Wonderful! I always look Forward to see a new chapter.
The Traveller is Really a suiting name for Scotch Tape.
I know its hard, but your Father will always be in your Heart, Scotch Tape. About your Mother, Remember what your Father said when you were injured.
HELL TO THE GOD DAMN YES. Another chapter, whoop whoop!
"the fact that that she was"
"the fact that she was"?
"Not that it has been a"
"Not that it had been a"?
"Purple flames,” he said with a grin, all evidence"
"Purple flames,” she said with a grin, all evidence"?
"the Badlands rest in the middle"
"the Badlands rested in the middle"?
"to switch from from the Doctor"
"to switch from the Doctor"?
"She stopped rocked and glared at it."
"She stopped rocking and glared at it."? Though I'm not sure that's what you meant.
"Scotch signed. “Everyone"
"Scotch sighed. “Everyone"?
"What about Xiegfried so terrible that she just… broke."
"What about Xiegfried was so terrible that she just… broke?"?
"I can’t get us out of here. I can do anything."
"I can’t get us out of here. I can't do anything."?
"me that. Morrow too. They choose"
"me that. Marrow too. They choose"?
"with even Doctor Xandros was nodding, albeit"
"with even Doctor Xandros nodding, albeit"?
"With us.” Scotch she looked at Pythia"
"With us.” She looked at Pythia"?
Another quite excellent chapter! :D
Glad to see you back and writing. The wait makes the chapter all the better
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thanks for the line edits!
Thank you for another great chapter, I am really looking forward to these. I know you've had some problems with writing this story lately and I hope you resolved them. I hope you will manage to continue and finish the story in a way that makes you happy, I know we will all be happy with it because you're just that good of a writer Don't worry about the delay, we've all learned to be patient with you You have our love and support!
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You're welcome. :)
Thanks again for writing!
...Apparently someone downvoted my comment for some reason, though? Huh. [shrugs]
Wow! What an amazing chapter. The last few have been lacking in my opinion, but this one really blew me away.
I'm starting to lose track of where people are/have been in relation to each other and key locations. Not gonna lie, this is at least part due to the distance between chapters. now I'm not going to tell you just to hurry up or anything but do you think you could add a cliff notes of the things that have happened so far or something like that?
I will say though, I absolutely love the story and cannot wait for more
Damn. That whole section hurts to read. Scotch's decision is incredibly mature and - provided she's still around at the end - one that Precious will hopefully one day be grateful for. Still, sorry Precious.
"Hey bad guys! Screw you"
Scotch is out here with the 'Rage against the dying of the light' play. I won't say it's the smart play, but it's certainly a bold one. The call to arms is certainly more promising than continuing on as they were, hoping they make it to Roam before something - Empire related or otherwise - offs them. Might still happen but Scotch has protagonism and a bad cough on her side.
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I'd love to know what really worked for you.
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It's hard to say, specifically. I'm not entirely good at figuring out what I like about something, but I'll try. I really liked the fact that this furthered a lot of things that were mentioned in previous chapters, as well as progressing things as a whole. It wasn't just famine and despair this whole chapter, it was a lot of growth and completion. I know that this is an apocalypse, and things are going to be bad for everyone involved, but that makes chapters like these great. At least, in my opinion.
This sounds like a plan I can endorse.
He's going to need some bubblegum and a straw to make that plan feasible.
D'awww!
*she said
*an actual
I should try this at work one of these days.
Yeah, but how many of them were main characters?
That's a hell of a thing to say about your kinda sorta marefriend.
Isn't Rampage still alive?
Ask your father that question.
*It just
This seems likely to backfire. Spectacularly!
I feel like she could have some great conversations with Rasputin.
*to the wall
I wonder how much of that was true before she said it?
Fuck yeah been waiting and checking daily for the update cant wait to read
Awesome chapter! Rocky is my new favorite spirit.
Oof, welp that was pretty disheartening. Moving on!
I really was impressed by the ending of this chapter as well, Scotch is really coming into her own.
Good chapter!
And what a glorious rant
Wooo Fight the power!
Thank you Somber. I’m glad you are continuing to develop this.
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thanks for the line by line. I really appreciate reviews and corrections like this.
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Glad to help.
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Depending on how long she lasted before the talisman entered its dormant phase, probably (but then you'd probably want to count all the moon ponies, too), but she's also, you know, on the moon.
I knew once I started reading this again from the beginning, a new chapter would be added. Keep up the great work!
Wow. I lived to the moment when new chapter released. Wow. And that chapter is amazing. Thank you Somber and redactors.
This is a great story. Thanks for writing it Somber.
I think Xandros actually never put his mask back down between these sentences.
That should be Marrow, right?
I find that I’m really enjoying Rocky as part of the group, and that Black Book scene was particularly good at messing with perceptions of reality.
I appreciate the frustrating tragedy that Pythia's can't-talk-about-being-a-shaman issue is like depression; a problem for which friendship is at its very best a bandage; and no matter how close a friend is, healing it is as impossible for a friend to do as it is for them to do literal surgery or give pharmaceutical advice, since, you know, most people's friends are not medical professionals.
And it actually it feels like there's some sort of equivalent analogue Scotch has. Pythia's ~shaman-depression and Scotch's ~shaman-something. It’s like Scotch has the same thing Pythia does, but doesn’t realise it yet.
That made me giggle.
Verily looking forward to the upcoming kerfuffle
Rocky is best rock.
And now the shit has hit the fan!
Somber, please continue this. It's a fantastic fic and you're a fantastic writer.
Finally got an opportunity to read through the new chapter, and I loved it! I eagerly await the next one! Keep it up Somber!
Rocky: Most Valuable Rock in the Wastelands
Blackjack will forever be my spirit animal but the cursed filly crusade is shaping up some pretty awesome characters as well. :D
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I think Vega was bluffing. Galen is far to useful and profitable for the Carnilian to beat him up for wasting supplies. His clinic is a good source of income and having a skilled doctor who can patch up your men for free without asking any questions is invaluable.
So his profit was having a Precious protect one of his most valuable assets with the possibility of her continuing to work for the Carnilian after the year was over.
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Pretty much. Vega's a criminal, but he's a Logos. Logos are very mathematical about things. If Galen was wasting supplies on everything, he'd cut Galen off pretty quickly. He'd probably just withdraw his protection and let the mob throw him into the razor grass. When dealing with Logos criminals, you don't worry about maniacs. You worry about the calculation of precisely what you are worth to them and what it is worthwhile for them to do, or not do, to you. This tends to make Logos some of the most cold blooded killers you'll face.
Other tribe criminality varies too. The Propoli criminals are experts at shaving funds and resources for their own use. They'll siphon 10% off of everything, figuring that every good project should have 10% of wiggle room that won't be noticed. Achu criminals are simple. They punch you... for whatever reason... you break, they take what they want from you and move on. Get out of their way and they generally forget about you in 5 minutes. Tappahani is fraud. They'll claim to use the most expensive spices, but really they just spritzed it with a blast of dash and that's why you're so jazzed about that meal.
Now, I know I've been fighting for Pythtape since the original Horizons, but now I want Scotchs roaming harem. Precious has secretly always been my favorite and now that I know shes interested, I'm going to never let go of the hope that she'll also end up with Scotch
Eyes for days?
Eyes for days!
Oh Luna, Scotch went full Blackjack!
Not sure if
or ?
Only time will tell!
I have finally caught up after 2 months of trying to listen for a few hours while at work. I love the character development, story, and all the hard work you and your editing team have put into this. Keep up the great work! Also, how did Adolpha forget about Skylord! lmfao.
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Well, she does have 2000 soldiers under her command and gave that order a while ago. She was mostly hoping that the Blood legion would go after Scotch but they sent Korgax's crew instead.
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Yea, I get that. It just seems like from Skylord's view, in my eyes, that they were really close. Kind of like how Twilight is Celestia's personal student, but more General's personal hand, claw, hoof etc.
Wow, Precious admitting her feelings for Scotch was unexpected, but really gives her more depth as a character. At the beginning of the story I didn’t really care for her, now I want to hug her. Poor filly just has her first crush and that crush is her best friend, who’s already interested in somezebra else.
Scotch really showed a great amount of maturity, in how she dealt with Precious. Defiantly a lot more maturity than Blackjack showed most of the time. It probably has something to do with the fact that she’s been outside of Stable 99 for more than two years and realized how fucked-up that place was.
On the other hand, Scotch also made some really poor choices with her last sexual partners. First Bastard in her stupid attempt at dealing with grief the Blackjack way and then Vicious in Rice River. It’s like she’s attracted to assholes. I don’t mind if she ends up with Precious, Pythia, both, someone else or nobody at all. But please Scotch, stay away from amoral asshole mercenaries. You deserve better! Much better!
Calling it now, The Eye is actually in The Hoof right under the Star House.
No, I don’t really believe it, but part of me wants it to be true. Just to see everyone’s reaction when they realize that they went on an Epic journey across the world while their destination was literally next door.
Pythia has a serious identity crisis on top of all her other problems. Is each of her incarnations the same person or is each one a different one who only remembers the past ones? Somehow this reminds me of Doctor Who and The Doctor’s incarnations. Fact is, that Zebra has a lot of mental baggage.
An average day in the life of a Call of Cthulhu investigator.
Hate to say it, but I agree with Unicorn Jerk again. Sometimes there a things you can’t fix and battles you can’t win. Doing a Blackjack won’t change that and can even make things worse.
The New Empire, like most readers, doesn’t give a crap about Bastard.
I don’t think coming back from the Moon is the reason, why they are hunting her. It’s because she got in the way. If the shaman is right, she was supposed to die on the Moon, but the timeline was altered and she survived. If she hadn’t survived she obviously couldn’t accompany Pythia and Majina to the Zebra Homeland and Precious would also have no reason to join them. Without Scotch (and Precious) they may have failed or never interfered with the New Empire In the first place. So Scotch basically has to die because of the Butterfly effect.
Well maybe Bastard will show up in this story, too. After all, nobody expected Charity. Maybe he got shaman powers, too. Unlikely, but imagining him talking with spirts would be kind of hilarious.
Homelands, where even tock rocks have interesting personalities and fears. Part of me wants him to be a permanent part of Scotch entourage.
Green Menace: 2 Book of Unspeakable Horrors: 0
That was a really epic “Come at me Bro!” Scotch pulled off. Of course, there’s now going to be a large number of Gold Legionnaires homing in on their position. I expect things to turn nasty real quick.
Also up until now Scotch only threw a wrench into the New Empire’s plans by accident. And that already resulted in some serious setbacks. If they had just left her alone, things probably would’ve been fine for them. But they tried again and again to kill her. Each time failing! And now she’s pissed! If I were them I would be afraid. Really, really afraid.
So now that I’ve finally catched up, I wonder what’s going to happen next.
Somehow I expect a rather one-sided fight, most of Zebra TV’s crew will not survive. But I guess there’s also someone nearby who heard Scotch message and is going to save her somehow. The next chapter is going to be an interesting one.
Precious has fantasies like her her father, but is fantasy-prone, like her mother. It is too bad that Spike and Precious do not know about each other.
Is this going to be the next tomb of ever reading?