I'm going to keep this short, because rehashing my regrets is about the last thing I need right now.
Most of my readers weren't satisfied with the ending. The truth is, neither was I, but I published it anyway.
So this is more of a canvassing post, if nothing else, but over the past week or so, I put together this in between while working on other things.
I guess what I'm asking is whether I should continue with it or not.
So have some appropriate music.
So, I'm going to come out and say it:
My chances of making it to Everfree Northwest this year are slim, and getting worse by the day. The same can be said about, well, most other conventions short of this weekend's Genericon.
Alright, so anyone reading this, I need suggestions.
Basically, names and crimes of criminals to be tried in Twilight's day court.
I've got 3 so far, I need, like, 7.
Anyone able to lend a hand?
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Flash Sentry - Waifu StealingBroken Fence - theft of classified documents
Dominant Wing - murder of a high level public official
Those just came off the top of my head
Oh, I have a nice prototype OC that could fit. That is if you want to throw in somepony from ouuside.
Quintal Weight - Cheating on tax counting in the ministry on 10 milion bits. (Crystal Pony, He worked at the ministry tax department and regulary took a free-off-charge sum to his pocket based on expired law, got unspecyfied support from an outlander gryffon that goes by the name Kirkore)
Archon Dakku: earth pony, charged with instigating a revolt
Names escape me, but I can see Twi descending into petty charges too, such as:
1. Changing the recipe for her favorite dessert at Sugarcube Corner
2. Mismanagement/negligence leading to a 5% drop in shelving effeciency at royal library
/just random ideas
White Collar - for embezzlement
Drill Sergeant Tweak, my OC, on trial for killing a private in basic training.
No, really, it would be a nifty thing to see. Not played for laughs, but a guy who pushed a soldier too far in training and ended up killing him. It would be manslaughter, I think, or negligent homicide. If the kid lied about his physical condition, like he had some chronic illness or weakness of the body but didn't tell the Royal Guard about it so he could join, then it wouldn;t be black and white, since the Drill didn't know about it, but he still pushed him further than regulations allowed. It would force Twilight to really think.
Assault and his twin brother Battery. (I've used these two before)
Wingding, accused of Cloud Theft from Cloudsdale's reserves (where he would take them to back-country poor farmers and sell the resulting rain at below-market prices.)
Cold Blood - serial killer/mass murderer
Sliver Tongue - disguises self to get into places, everypony believes what he says unless heavily scrutinized, was caught trying to steal from Canterlot Castle
Dirty Blow, you can deicide what you want to do with it.
Soup Sandwich, triple homicide, but he's pleading insanity and every psychologist who tries to pin him down gets differing results
Arch Powers, white collar crime, and given that he was a MAJOR business mogul, the charges are BIG.
Splinter Shade- Peformed unethical experiments on ponies in an attempt to create an alicorn using science, torturing and killing a research crew he ponynapped using dark magic to get the resources to attempt these experiments in the first place.
Crab Apple of the Apple Family, make it a bit personal for Twi and friends. Charges could range anywhere from embezzlement to racketeering or anything involving dishonesty to the family.
Silver Stomp: The charge could either be attempted sexual assault on a mare who rejected him, or just for being a grade-A douchebag.
Regi sides: multiple counts of attempted regicide through double crossing. It was a wonder anyone ever trusted this pegasus.
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Salt and his brother Buttery - Pastry Chefs turned mob enforcers.
Under Cover: A CIA agent who's investigating a drug bust, but got caught.
Don't have a name, but for a crime, "Lollygagging" is always a good standby.
Cherry Split. Crimes include but are not limited to, impersonating a cleric, tax evasion, forgery, defacing of historic and political property, impersonating a royal guard, multiple homicides for the countless bodies found in his basement, which is also believed to be the source of his secret ingredient for banana splits, grave digging....
Generalized Mayhem. It's hilarious and canon lol
Lezard Chronostar (my OC from Inner Demons) - charged with illegal spell crafting. He tried to make a time spell that would allow a pony to travel into any era in the past. This level of time manipulation is illegal though, and he could have destroyed the time space continuum with that.
Flameheart, Arson. Insists she was only doing "what her cutie mark was telling her." To possibly make it interesting she made a point of only targeting abandoned structures after making sure they were empty. Was caught with severe burns after she rescued a homeless pony in a sub-basement she initially missed.
Hot pants.
Charge: Public solicitation of objects and or services that are of a sexual nature.
Golden pyrite.
Attempted theft from prince Blueblood's personal vault.
3647310 i think twilight would secretly facehoof that it was only attempted theft from bluebloods vault instead of actual theft
I don't have a name but i thought of neglect and/or mistreatment of foals in an orphanage.
General census: trying to insight riots and mobs against the crown.
Store bought: illegal trading between nobles.
Chester Tonne: He tore down his neighbour's fence; the neighbour is pressing charges of Destruction of Property, while Chester claims the fence was constructed illegally on his property. The case is made worse by the fact that both Chester's and his neighbour's title deeds indicate ownership of the land in question.
Sugar Cane, suspected as the cause of his brother Able Minded's dissapearence. Pleads not guilty for he is not his brothers keeper. Plot twist where Able is actually alive and just got lost in the forest or ran away after fighting with his brother.
Iron Comet-Leering at Rarity's lot. Maybe public indecency too.
Flint Lock, destruction of public property.
Boon Doggle - His negligence in his position as a factory worker led to the maiming of several co-workers. You could make the decision super difficult if he was away from his post for very good reasons, but not good enough legally speaking. Also the factory owner is a shithead and attempting to sue Boon to cover the costs of the other ponies suing the company for poor safety protocol/crap equipment. Could evolve into the owner being put on impromptu trial and it's discovered that he puts minimum effort into the actual business because it's a cover for something else.
Go Ring.
Attempted uprising to support a fascist dictator, who killed himself upon a the raid on their base.