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    Happy Holidays^^

    Thought I would take a break from playing dead to wish you all happy holidays^^ Hope you are all safe and healthy and surrounded by loved ones, and those who aren't, well, I hope this little post makes it a bit better somehow:twilightsheepish:

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    Really, really sorry about being so quiet as of late. Been busy with work and other stuff, and that non-pony story.

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    Yes I am alive

    Sorry I've been so absent as of late. My new project kinda absorbed me a bit :twilightsheepish: Actually, for the past year ever since I decided to write a Warriors fanfiction I couldn't really think about much else as far as writing is concerned, even right now.

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    My Warriors fanfiction is ready^^

    Well, maybe not ready per say, but the prologue and first chapter were published on AO3^^

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  • 82 weeks
    It's been 10 years!

    Yeah, it's been 10 years since I've made an account on this website and published the first two chapters of Rebirth of the Damned, my first story (you can't tell now because back then when you would edit chapters and save them then it would overwrite the date of publication).

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Aug
17th
2014

The Stars had Aligned. What now? · 7:28pm Aug 17th, 2014

"When the Stars Align" is over. Starburst and Starfall can be said to be (non-canonicly to Kilala's Next Generation universe) officially shipped. So... What now?

Do I plan to write a sequel? Do I plan to write a triquel? Do I plan to write a prequel?

OF COURSE!

I had way too much fun working with Kilala and her characters and with writing Starfall to stop this now. Heck, I hadn't even explained everything about Starfall's past, hadn't I? I might take a little break, but I plan to continue this story.

Now, however, I must ask you something. The sequel would be about as long as When the Stars Align, and I am not sure if that is a good think. So... would you rather prefer me to split it up into several smaller stories? Each, hopefully, with a separe cover? I know some of you had been pestering Kilala to make more art of Starfall, so I think this would make you happy XD However, there might be some problems with that, which could complicate and deley next parts...

So, what would seem better for you? Have a long sequel, or several smaller ones?

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Very long sequel please. Make it about 20% longer than the first one. :rainbowdetermined2:

If it's going to be romance/adventure, make it a long fic. Slice of life stories work well as short fics, though. Long or short, I'm already looking forward to it, seeing how engaging this one has been. I must admit, up 'til now I've preferred the Starburst/Del shipping. Love to see something on how the Del/Candy thing took off...:pinkiehappy:

A long sequel. Please. I love this story and I'm sad it has to end. Please write a longer sequel. Good luck writing.

one long sequel please!:pinkiehappy:

long sequel please:pinkiehappy:. It takes a lot less effort to make a long sequel than it does to make multiple short sequels considering you have to come up with new titles, cover arts(optional), etc. so ya long sequel defiantly seems best, to me anyways

Just make sure you link us to it in a blog or something.

Long sequel! THE LEGION DEMANDS IT!

I don't know what you will do, but I know one thing: It's going to be juicy!

I vote for one long sequel and just insert some of Kilala's awesome artwork into the chapters.

Speaking of Kilala's art. I believe the picture we all want to see is one of Starburst and Starfall together with their son and or daughter.

Do multiple shorts

The more artwork the merrier

Long sequel are best sequel. I would love to see how well these two love birds hide this relationship from starburst's friends

So now we have Kilala official and Borsuq addon. I love fanfiction...

Personally, I'd prefer a long sequel.

I'd love to see a long sequel.

I like to see s bunch of one shots depicting moments in starfall and starburts relationship like say a pregnancy scare or proposal (im a sucker for those kind of stories) but if you write a long story i also be happy with a prequel involving more of starfalls back story it has some potential for some pretty damn epic moments

Comment posted by The Avenger deleted Aug 19th, 2014

I would prefer both. A long sequel with oneshots here and there.

sequel with one-shots

It all depends mon ami.

Do you want to make a story in which the main focus of the story is a character?
Do you want to make a story in which they all interact and go on their merry life's?
Do you want to make a story in which a creature of nightmares is hunting one of them down?
Do you want to make a story in which they meet a misfit family of weird beings and freaks of nature?
Do you want to make a story with the same level of dedication you used on 'When The Stars Align'?
Are you willing to hear ideas or concepts of other authors and try to incorporate them into the story?
Will you suffer sleepless nights while trying to finish writing a chapter?
Is the frustration of a writers block really worth the effort when your mind can't make your creative juices flow and write something interesting?
Or have you finally bitten something you can't chew well enough to swallow it?

As I said before mon ami, it all depends on what you choose to do next

Welp, this story is over and now I feel lost in life. I guess it's time to go into chryogenic stasis until the next story comes out. Long sequel for the win. Goodbye until I wake from my eternal sleep once more - Entity.

people long sequel means less artwork!!!!!!

one shots get more scenes

Forget the artwork we already had an idea of he's looks and some art here and there so I vote for Long Sequel.

Don't write a sequel. Finish Rebirth frist, then write a sequel for that. Then finish Equestria's Will of Fire. Then write a sequel for this xD

Don't forget about One Hundred and Fifty Nights xD

2379526 Wow dude I wasn't being serious. Fucking hell you don't have to take everything like its 100% true

I'm serious about Rebirth though. Hurry up and finish that shit man

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Have a primary long sequel, and some shorter side stories about stuff that happens to them.

I would go for a single long sequel myself...

I VOTE FOR A LONG SEQUEL!

Long sequel. With sprinkles, please.

Also, Starfall´s talent for dark magic should be a big plot point; even with the criminal charges removed, I cannot imagine Twilight, Celestia or Luna simply letting the colt do as a please: they probably will insist in putting him under their care (and watch).

I say both. Write a long squeal but make it open enough you can have little fluffy things floating around if a short story comes to mind.

Just because Starburst and Starfall are together now, doesn't mean that he won't prank her every once in a while. You can write a long sequel and several short one, maybe one about a prank war they did after Starfall did something to Starburst's royal guard armor. Like say this:
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I prefer a long sequel, but a bunch of shorter stories isn't too bad either. Besides, I like the cover art, but it's not a huge part of my story-reading experience.

Also, loved the story! (and other pieces of your work)

When I saw "To be continued", I jumped for joy! I certainly did not expect it! :pinkiegasp:

I feel that a long sequel could do amazing things, but at the same time after a bit you could end up getting locked into the story line if you have the storyline in forced places, then if you get some creative ideas, you might be locked.

Long sequel, and little side stories. Kinda like side stories filling gaps between the main stories.

I think it would be best to do several one-shots (say 3-6) and one long sequel. The one-shots can be about things like Starburst's friends taking great pleasure about the fact that she and Starfall are now together, Valient Heart's reaction and protectiveness of Starburst form Starfall, and Eris showing up. As for the long sequel, I say it be about the two Stars confronting that 'Master' who enslaved Starfall when he was young. I know that we probably won't know his name, but I think a guy like that would probably uses many names to avoid the law, like the one I gave him: Zarren Zhan (3 guesses where I came up with that). I hope you make your decisions soon.

2469541 Okay, seriously: why people think that "Master" is still alive? It was cute the first few times, but c'mon: the colt knows dark magic, had to find a loophole in his orders to burn his flank off to free himself from his control... as mentioned in the last chapter, he had some friends in the circus, and as mentioned before, all were treated the same way. So what do you think the first thing he did was?

2469559 Lead everyone to attack the 'Master'? But, as Starfall stated, 'a murderer is one thing I am not and will never be.' I can't say the same about the other slaves, but there is the chance that he somehow survived.

2469654 remember how he justified to himself in the second-to-last chapter about Ripper the Jackal?

2469665 Yeah. :twilightblush: I'm just not sure that 'Master' guy is still alive is all. I guess we'll find out in one of the sequels.

Personally I'd prefer a longer sequel but I think both would be good to, short one shots in between the main story :twilightsmile:

I say a longer sequel. To many short ones would just get confusing and hard to follow.

you managed to get both of these stories on the featured board and i think that you should do more than one sequel i think if you can get the next one on the featured board you should keep writing them.

-Ponykiller_V2 :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:


Edit: this means a vote for Longer sequel BTW

DeX

i would enjoy reading a longer sequel. rather then shorter story's.

Personally, I don't really care about the length of the story. I think you should just do what you think would work best.

EDIT: Shit, I forgot to check when this was posted! Um... It's the thought that counts.

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