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Bloonjitsu7


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    Where I've Been

    Content Warning: I wouldn't recommend reading this any further if you don't handle darker/messier topics very well (mental health, death, etc.).

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  • 16 weeks
    Story Update - Dec 25th 2024

    Happy Holidays everypony! I'm going to start work on part 2 of chapter 6 soon, since I've been taking a break from writing over the holidays. I hope all of you had a great December, and I'll see you all again soon!

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  • 18 weeks
    Story Update - Dec 10th 2024

    Part 1 of Chapter 6 is finally up! It took me a while to get it polished, but I like the way that it's turned out. I'm going to start work on Part 2 pretty soon, though it will probably be a while before it's done (nowhere close to as long as this one though). That's pretty much all I wanted to say, I'll update you all again when I've made progress on the next part!

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  • 19 weeks
    Story Update - Dec 1st 2024

    Hi everypony! I'm still working on the next chapter, but it's taking a while for me to get through it. Since this next chapter is comprised of 6 short stories, my new plan is to release half of the chapter very soon (hopefully later today) and then release the second half of it later once it's finished. I know it's been way too long since I've actually released any new chapters, so I thought that this would be a good way to fix that! I'll update you all again soon, and I hope you all enjoy the

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  • 26 weeks
    Story Update - Oct 19th 2024

    Hey everypony! Just wanted to update all of you on the progress of chapter 6! I've been working on it slowly over the past couple weeks, but I've recently gotten a good chunk of it done. This is going to be by far the longest chapter in the story, so it will still be a bit before it's finished. It's been a challenge for me to write, but I've finally started to get the hang of it. I've mentioned this before, but chapter 6 is going to be a collection of 6 short stories that take place in-between

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Apr
14th
2025

Where I've Been · 12:07am Last Monday

Content Warning: I wouldn't recommend reading this any further if you don't handle darker/messier topics very well (mental health, death, etc.).

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Oh wow, this is all really amazing to hear! Thank you so much for the in depth response to my story :raritystarry:

If you didn't notice from the description/author's notes, Inner Strength is part of an ongoing fanfic series called Who We Become. If you want to see more of Twilight, Fluttershy, and everyone else in this incarnation of their world, then that's the place to do it! :scootangel:

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I'd love to share my thoughts!
Inner Strength is probably my favorite story on this site that I've read so far, it's extremely good the entire way through and the writing is top-notch. I love the way you slowly built the relationship between Twilight and Fluttershy, it just felt so natural and well paced. The stuff with Fluttershy's past was also really well done, as soon as I saw Fluttershy's reaction to “You know, you look a lot like her, Shy" the alarm bells started going off in my head. The setup to that whole plot point was executed perfectly, and I honestly can't wait to reread this at some point to pick up on even more details. This story is also probably one of the most emotional ones I've ever read in my whole life, I cried like actually 7 or 8 times throughout the whole thing. The ending was just too much for my gay little heart to handle :fluttercry:

Other various things I loved:
- The DnD (or OnO, I guess) chapter was really fun, in fact the entire section with Twi's family is a great break from the normal drama. Just very soft and cozy.
- The chapter with Twi and Shy at the creek watching the silly little guys do their silly little dance was a really fun read, and also a great way of demonstrating the turning point in their relationship.
- I absolutely loved the way you wrote Luna, she is genuinely amazing here.
- I also loved pretty much everything about Amber, especially her relationship with the aforementioned moon goddess.
- I like how realistically Applejack is written, she's not outright homophobic to her friends, but it's obvious that she would have a serious issue with it if it was anypony but her closest friends.
- Sweet Celestia I want both Ivy Jewel and Stormy Skies to stick their heads in the nearest blender. Absolutely loved to hate them.

There's probably a good few other things I forgot to mention, but I do want to thank you so much for writing this. It genuinely is one of the best written stories I have ever read, and was an absolute delight to go through. Looking forwards to reading more of your stuff soon! :twilightsmile:

Thank you for adding Inner Strength to you bookshelf! :yay: Would love to hear your thoughts on it if you have interest in sharing, but by no means feel obligated lol :twilightsheepish:

Thanks for the fave.

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