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"Innocent" Combat Report · 10:06am May 30th, 2019

These are the official numbers from each battle in Innocent. More battles will be added as they occur. Spoilers below: Be warned!

Battle of Greenspring Glade (Chapter 12):
Total Starting Troops:

  • Equestrian Forces: 372

    1. 370 Royal Guard: 50 Lances, 50 Mages, 150 Fliers, 120 Swords
    2. 2 Royals: Princess Celestia, “Captain” Shining Armor
  • Trolls: 9000

    1. 9000 Nadrud Warriors

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2330770 It's been on my list to read for months. I figured I'd give it the long overdue promotion it deserved.

Thanks for adding The Ultimatest Evil to your library!

I know, I saw :pinkiesmile: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked them :twilightsmile:

2279629 Don't look now, but I didn't stop........... :moustache:

Thank you so much for reading and adding my stories to your "T'was good" folder :twilightsmile:

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