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Thanks to everyone who's read so far! Please don't be shy about commenting on what you do and don't like, detailed criticism is always helpful.

I don't plan to rely on the Mane 6 for most of the story; the intro needed them, but from now on I only expect to bring them in now and then where it makes sense for them to be involved. Instead I'll be fleshing out some background ponies (looking at Star Hunter and Quick Fix) as lead characters, and leaning on secondary characters to fill in the gaps.

Hope you all enjoy it!

Well, I was a fool for thinking that he would stay human after you mentioned some spell, and the elements.

Meh. I know what you mean. I agonized over whether to tag this as human or not for a while. In the end I left it, because no matter what happens to Walker, what's in his head is human. He seems to be adapting quickly, but he's really just suppressing his reaction via shock and training right now, so his still-human mind is going to start giving him fits very soon.

That said, I really haven't decided whether he "recovers" at some point. Walker's life isn't an easy one, and it would be just his luck to become human again right as he's finally gotten used to his new form.

Really sorry if you feel misled, that totally wasn't my intention :( Do you think it makes sense to remove the human tag so it's a better description?

You know, the more I think about it, the more I think you've just inspired a much stronger idea than my original concept, Seraph. Owe you a cider for that!

Anyone else drawn here by the Human tag but disappointed by the quick transformation, have faith! Walker isn't done with his human form yet - not by a longshot.

Intriguing. Looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

Hey, thanks for the comment and I'm glad it held your attention! Will be updating at least once a week, and more often with the shorter chapters - the next one is a short non-Walker-POV interlude, and it should be up tonight or tomorrow. Let me know what you think!

Quick change of plans: I needed to go back and watch the S2 finale episodes for some specific changeling research, and the interlude I ended up writing was VERY short -- so short it didn't feel right only adding that even if it was a quick turnaround. So instead, I'll be updating this weekend with the interlude plus a full new chapter instead.

Oh uh i though it will be different story (mostly because i didn't correctly read description). You know when you read that main six will help changeling instead human that something new especially when he is thief.
But uh i just read it wrong :P my bad

that would be interesting to read.

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