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Twilight Sparkle learns something impossible after an experiment of hers goes bad. Before she knows it, she is visited by someone thought long-dead and is exposed to a secret war. The question that still has yet to be answered... What is the Prize?

A hidden war is waged between the lines of history's greatest tomes, hidden until now by a web of lies spanning centuries. Now, Twilight must do the unthinkable and wade into battle to save Equestria from evil beings unknown.

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We need a shouting Twilight emote so I can yell "THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!!!!!!" :facehoof:
Ya... Guess what the first thing I thought of was when I saw the title :facehoof:

2343811 Well, there's a reason for that. ;)

And might I recommend... :twilightangry2: THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!!! :twilightangry2:

Hopefully the villain in this will be as entertaining as the Kurgan. :pinkiecrazy:

Holy shit. Is this a Highlander inspired fic? If so, I'm looking forward to it. Tracked, and upvoted.

A note, though; tighten up your sentences. You had a few that ran on way too long.

There's almost nothing here... it's a pretty generic prologue so far. Until you get to the actual story people reading it may be disappointed. That may be the reason for the down votes. However the concept has my attention and I am honestly a fan of Highlander so I will track this and wish you the best on future chapters.

Til all are one! (That's not the right quote! :pinkiegasp:)

2345996 I see. Thanks for clarifying. I knew there was some reason why there'd be downvotes before things even get started. I'll keep that in mind.

i'm interested, but i don't know if i actually LIKE it until we get things moving.

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