Doctor Song is a unicorn surgeon from Canterlot who has come to Ponyville to work at the Ponyville Hospital. Coincidentally, a villainous stallion has been making trouble with the locals. What does he plan to gain from injuring the citizens of Ponyville? What is this mysterious stallion after? While Twilight and Pinkie Pie race to identify the criminal, Doctor Song is stuck in the hospital patching up the stallion's victims.
Will probably contain gore in later chapters. Actually, it definitely will.
Chapters (8)
Well, one thing you could do is space out your paragraphs to give the eye some space between them. Double spacing is your friend.
This delightful piece is a good introduction to the character.
Also, for fifteen years old you have the makings of an author. Keep working at it.
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Ok, I'll keep that in mind and go do that right now. Thanks.
Spiffy!
Dat Rainbow crash... Oh well, we love her anyway!
>> World Theory
Yeah, she likes to act like a tough guy, then ends up getting hurt.
He he Pinkies a conspiracy theroist
I also like the refrence you put there even if you didnt think about it... but the fact that a chapters named who and the title has a Doctor Song in it is cool refrefrence
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*exclamation mark* I just got that!
Squee!~Ahem…oh wow......