Pinkie Pie is leaving you at home for a week so she can go run off to the Crystal Kingdom with her friends. You two lead a very loving romance, tons of sexual exploration. Perfect right? Well no matter what the situation she will not, under any cir
2181817 Its either butt hurt or jealously. Im guessing both. Please go troll somewhere else. To the author: Brav-fucking-o you win the damn internet for this chapter. Seriously had me rolling, Ill will be giving it a reread when I find my special vibrating friend. i.imgur.com/xD4iz.jpg
The previous chapter was very interesting, but them errors made it really hard to read. This one feels 10x better, only minor error here and there and the story is on the roll. Brohoof.
Phew, I was worried that last chapter and the shitload of bashing comments were gonna overload you or something. And too think it all started around something stupid as deleting someone's post or something like that. Either way the snowball rolled. Well, either that or you purposefully trolled them. In which bra-fucking-vo. I don't even want to think about how many comments there were that all stemmed from that little deletion of a little comment and turned into hatred for every little thing. That would take some skill and a lot of luck. I salute you sir.
Speaking of trolling. I think Discord is making his own fun by trolling and misleading Cup Cake. Now if only Carrot stuck around and fought. I would've liked to see Anon walk through town or wherever he is boasting of his victory.
2181822 Thank you, i am glad you liked it, I will be working on Chapter three in a day or two after a little break. 2181837 Thank you, i must say though i never had a pegasister clop to my story before. < Mildly turned on. 2181857 Please do not troll the commenters. 2181925 Up-vote for the pic, made me LOL 2181937 Well i had 10x the editors and proofreads although i didn't get to name them all 2181946 I will never stop a story based on what a commenter say, some actually thought i would delete the story entirely because of it. Remember though Anon is not boastful, although he may publish a book about the fight. 2181950 At least i wasnt the only one.
Oh yay, a new chapter. Here's hoping the small amount of time it will spend in the 'latest updates' column gets it enough new thumbs (both up and down as both count as 'activity'), faves and comments to get it back in the feature box.
Simply because what happened last time it did was fun.
I'll make sure to read the new chapter later tonight.
Seriously, what the hell? Over two hundred dislikes? Why? There are a few grammatical/spelling errors, I will admit -although they are few and far bewteen-, but that's not a big enough reason to drop over two hundred negative votes. Hell, my only beef with this story is that it's second person, and I'm willing to overlook the fact that it's a perspective that I particularly loathe to give it a chance; and I'm glad I did! This story is damn awesome, it's not like anything I've read before, and it's kept my attention for so far.
2181993Enjoy 2182002 I don't mind the dislikes, it draws curiosity, most like it and some hate it. Its natural for a clop. 2181996 Bweano 2182004 Its all good he deleted his comments. 2182025 Il take that as a huge complement. 2182060 Who knows? >.> 2182102 Do not worry, i got this. 2182214 Guess you'll have to keep reading and find out
This is a fun story, I don't clop but I enjoy the comedy, also loving Cup's personality. I noticed a number of errors, mostly with pronouns though some words that I'm sure you meant something else to be there entirely. Also her irises would be pink, not her pupils. Other than that keep up the great work.
2181837 Really? Well then I guess we'll need a volunteer. *Looks around and sees none* Guess it falls to me, then. Ah, the things I do for Humanity's sake.
2182311 I am glad that you like it :D 2182365 I did it just for you 2182367 i would do it if it was Derpy. 2182414 Perfection in its greatest moment. \2182462 LOL 2182532 She didnt lie she just distorted the truth in her favor 2182847 I salute you good sir 2182916 You will have to read an d find out 2182987 Thank you i try my best. 2183616 Guess youll have to watch and find out
2184206 okey dokey lokey artichokey pokey~! (I love that line~!!!! I probably or most likely added the last two words...I am forgetful sometimes of things )
2184206 I ment that it reminded him of a soupaopra (if i could spell) not sex woopsie guess I shoulda made that clear Thank for not getting angry with a misunderstanding
Can't really say i like the idea of the princesses haveing herams. It is not romantic at all, and it just doesn't sound right. At least not for Celestia. It doesn't fit her.
This story is amazing.
2181817 Its either butt hurt or jealously. Im guessing both. Please go troll somewhere else.
To the author: Brav-fucking-o you win the damn internet for this chapter. Seriously had me rolling, Ill will be giving it a reread when I find my special vibrating friend.
i.imgur.com/xD4iz.jpg
This is one of the best clop fics i have ever read.
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Please sir, i want some more.
The previous chapter was very interesting, but them errors made it really hard to read.
This one feels 10x better, only minor error here and there and the story is on the roll. Brohoof.
Phew, I was worried that last chapter and the shitload of bashing comments were gonna overload you or something. And too think it all started around something stupid as deleting someone's post or something like that. Either way the snowball rolled. Well, either that or you purposefully trolled them. In which bra-fucking-vo. I don't even want to think about how many comments there were that all stemmed from that little deletion of a little comment and turned into hatred for every little thing. That would take some skill and a lot of luck. I salute you sir.
Speaking of trolling. I think Discord is making his own fun by trolling and misleading Cup Cake. Now if only Carrot stuck around and fought. I would've liked to see Anon walk through town or wherever he is boasting of his victory.
2181857
That doesn't even make sense.
Hmm, intersting twists introduced here, pal.
I had a fun time with this fic, many hilarious bits that had me chuckling to myself pretty hard. I surely won't be forgetting "Frost" anytime soon!
2181822 Thank you, i am glad you liked it, I will be working on Chapter three in a day or two after a little break.
2181837 Thank you, i must say though i never had a pegasister clop to my story before. < Mildly turned on.
2181857 Please do not troll the commenters.
2181925 Up-vote for the pic, made me LOL
2181937 Well i had 10x the editors and proofreads although i didn't get to name them all
2181946 I will never stop a story based on what a commenter say, some actually thought i would delete the story entirely because of it. Remember though Anon is not boastful, although he may publish a book about the fight.
2181950 At least i wasnt the only one.
Oh yay, a new chapter. Here's hoping the small amount of time it will spend in the 'latest updates' column gets it enough new thumbs (both up and down as both count as 'activity'), faves and comments to get it back in the feature box.
Simply because what happened last time it did was fun.
I'll make sure to read the new chapter later tonight.
Me gusta.
Seriously, what the hell? Over two hundred dislikes? Why? There are a few grammatical/spelling errors, I will admit -although they are few and far bewteen-, but that's not a big enough reason to drop over two hundred negative votes. Hell, my only beef with this story is that it's second person, and I'm willing to overlook the fact that it's a perspective that I particularly loathe to give it a chance; and I'm glad I did! This story is damn awesome, it's not like anything I've read before, and it's kept my attention for so far.
I do hope you decide to keep writing this.
Keep up the good work!
2181857 You know, you could have saved yourself some words there and just wrote "My dick is bigger than yours."
Same sentiment, fewer words.
The whole birthday comment was hilarious, but I like this and for some reason I hear John Delancey when I read Discord's lines.
This was funny and sexy. Tho i'm kinda curious if this is a herd fic who else will be in the herd?
Huh, someone went through and downvoted all the comments.
Someone has to much time on their hands.
I was having a good time... then the chapter ended... now I'm sad...
I realise Carrot Cake is the villain of this piece, but I'd suggest maybe easing up a bit on that front.
2181993 Enjoy
2182002 I don't mind the dislikes, it draws curiosity, most like it and some hate it. Its natural for a clop.
2181996 Bweano
2182004 Its all good he deleted his comments.
2182025 Il take that as a huge complement.
2182060 Who knows? >.>
2182102 Do not worry, i got this.
2182214 Guess you'll have to keep reading and find out
2182252
Oh, I will!
/evil laughter
This is a fun story, I don't clop but I enjoy the comedy, also loving Cup's personality. I noticed a number of errors, mostly with pronouns though some words that I'm sure you meant something else to be there entirely. Also her irises would be pink, not her pupils. Other than that keep up the great work.
Yes! Another fantastic chapter! It was so romantic! Also, on a related note, I too am allergic to silver. Coincidence?
Wow, am with discord on this! not the cross speices intercourse part though!
Perfect.
"It was nothing compared to what you got from your father, however."
Not trying to be a grammar nazi but I thinkg
"stop downgrading yourself"
shoudl be
"stop degrading yourself"
In the kitchen I imagine his face to be something like this cynicalscribble.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/homerdrool.png
2182365
And this was sent to the past by discord
looks like you get cake in your future!
lol, Cup lied
Oh mah lawd.
It should have been Cheerilee who fainted first. It would have been so her.
Chuck Ward...
Meh, close enough.
2181837
Really? Well then I guess we'll need a volunteer. *Looks around and sees none* Guess it falls to me, then. Ah, the things I do for Humanity's sake.
Kill carrot cake now
Even though this is a clop-fic (I don't really read too many clop-fics ), so-far, I'm REALLY liking this story~!! Keep up the good work!
Oh man. Discord's like the outsider now. I can't wait for more of this story
2182442
I'm trying to be a grammar nazi, and I think you should spell check before you correct someone.
"Thinkg" should be "Think" while "shoudl" should be "should"
Hominy Hopscotch! How did all of us miss this? You can't start a sentence with that word!
I'm a failure.
Is Discord in secrecy hoping to be proven wrong about interspecies relationships because he wants to have a chance for love and happiness himself?
2183616
Nah, he's just a dick.
2182311 I am glad that you like it :D
2182365 I did it just for you
2182367 i would do it if it was Derpy.
2182414 Perfection in its greatest moment.
\2182462 LOL
2182532 She didnt lie she just distorted the truth in her favor
2182847 I salute you good sir
2182916 You will have to read an d find out
2182987 Thank you i try my best.
2183616 Guess youll have to watch and find out
Just because Discord didn't get Celestia...
2184206 okey dokey lokey artichokey pokey~! (I love that line~!!!! I probably or most likely added the last two words...I am forgetful sometimes of things )
2183441 I don't believe in grammar Nazis, I believe in people typing like they actually learned something in school.
2183441
I type really fast and I sometimes mix up letters. What I should've said was it is more concise to use "degrading" instead of "downgrading"
2184206 I ment that it reminded him of a soupaopra (if i could spell) not sex woopsie guess I shoulda made that clear Thank for not getting angry with a misunderstanding
Can't really say i like the idea of the princesses haveing herams. It is not romantic at all, and it just doesn't sound right. At least not for Celestia. It doesn't fit her.
2185285 It doesn't fit her? Are you implying that Celestia has a huge, gaping vagina?