Pinkie Pie is leaving you at home for a week so she can go run off to the Crystal Kingdom with her friends. You two lead a very loving romance, tons of sexual exploration. Perfect right? Well no matter what the situation she will not, under any cir
What... what just happened? Sat down to read this, suddenly the clock is lying to me. I felt like I just got drawn into a hour and a half movie.
This story is always worth the wait, but this mega chapter is raising the bar to asstronomical levels, and I really hope every chapter comes out this magnificent.
“Oh? What are you going to do, grab that guy to stop me? What was his name? Michael McDoesn’tExist?” Sweet Christ on a pogo-stick, I cant decide whether to read that in Discords voice or ALucard's, both are so tempting!
"That perfect round fluffy ass that was now coming right towards your face. It was like a fantasy made real—Oh shit, she’s falling." "You say cracking your fingers over you is held in a long stretch. Lyra almost came on the spot from the sound alone" "s some old pervert who, it was tia" nice one "you wanted a nice piece of… Cake." so...much...win Inkie Pie. mfw I read this: i.imgur.com/t1DOAsI.png Y ou got out of the bed random spaces? under to wear Cup should be "where" on "wear" “A republican?” Epic scene of kicking down the door too :P FUCK NOOOO I HATE YOU CARROT, hopefully mary can usurp her authority.
you're killing me... I loved where this is going but you can't throw the whole Luna thing in there and then before hand make me promise to not have a alicorn in the herd.... its...its murder!
also... Morgan Freeman will now and forever be my dream guide.
It was a good story until you pulled real life politics in, pretty much called me a "bad guy" because we don't share the same beliefs. I wish you the best and brightest of futures, good bye.
2529189 Seriously? The republican joke? Well ok then sorry you didn't like it. did you miss the catholic reference in the other chapter? 2529111 Who said she was a tyrant O.O >.> you sure read into it just a little to much but sorry you didn't like it 2529065 i guess you will have to keep reading and find out how that turns out 2529053 Remember Inkie and Blinkie where shacked up in the same hotel, i am glad you liked the one liners ^_^ there is more to come in the next chapter. 2528752 It will be a bit, having to work on it tomorrow. 2528734 My editor should that to me while we were in editing, i was like "I want to use that!" nice catch btw. I used to just go right into the tempting part. 2528437 Seriously i thought this chapter would ahve been 9000-15000 words, i was wrong 2528701 you can thank my editor for that line ^_^ 2528056 thank you very much
Oh the end of the second act, and the players have being double. I really hope that scar will not last…well like he said magic is the "fuck you" of realty so I bet there must be spell for that, I'm pretty sure at least Rarity will not rest until that scar is gone. She is mad but she is still Rarity.
Great joke about the politician, and I loving that even the princesses will put their hats in the ring, I can't wait to see what move will try Celestia…no I can't wait to see the next move of all the mares, the twins the princesses, all is starting to come together.
Oh the face in Celestia when she is turn down, priceless, Frost is making history by the minute. And his reputation is about presented in court…he will need a layer, this looks like a job for…Phoenix Right! Layer extraordinary, he can save him, and if not Discord can do it
Yes, I can read it, but there are still a lot of times where you either forget a word or put in an extra letter that really fucks up the sentence and practically makes it unable to understand. Its like english isnt your first language... you damn foreigner
Loved it. The only part that I didn't like was the Republican part. Alienates too much of the reader audience, would've been better to go with politician or something that is equally generally hated on. Like lawyers or something else.
2529309 Good call English is my third language ^_^ But im no forener i was born in the states. 2529318 I should have went with lawyer, i just took that like from a old golf game i used to play, seriously its not that much to get worked up about. Damn they should no it a joke. Il just go in and change it. 2529281 Oh there will be alot going down :3 but remember this is a clop WITH a story line. its a sexy adventure of feels. guiding you down the path of greatness, remember he is a nice guy :D 2529423 joke was changed
2529449 I don't think you should. People here should be big boys, if they can't handle a pun at their expense, they shouldn't be here...considering this is a highly adult piece of literature.
2529470 :3 hehehehehe No. that scar actually has a purpose. Small but it really does. 2529482 Really? i never noticed :p But i already changed it. This time no one can take offense because im studying to become a lawyer. I want people to comment about what they love about the chapter and not about political views.
2529495 Oh i see, well lets see, he is doing a rich man a favor training her children, he officially has the mayor as herd mate, one of the princess want to be in his herd, and I bet Discord plan will not work if he is in prison. He seeing to have some cards in his side in case he goes to court
2529512 THis is the part of the story where things go downhill. But remember KoS loves leaving hints and there has been a huge hint in this story since chapter two.
2529586 Ah yeah the married issue, yeah I was wondering when Carrot was going to make his move. And this plus the elements coming, seeing to make the storm coming. Speaking of hints, those 2 hints of Bonbon…did Frost is turning a lesbian? Because, that could a giant achievement.
And if he end up in jail, well with that little among of males in Equestria he is free of prison rape, at least male prison rape.
2529730 HA - :3 thats not happening no dus es machina in this story 2529716 who knows i guess you will have to keep reading to find out. 2529650 Discord isnt allowed to interfere, He cant touch Carrot
2529272 I really dont wanna be that guy but.. Stop being a little bitch and ask him when we're gettin' more! ...ok...when can we expect another update? don't hurt me *runs and cowers in a corner*
I think the term is that our human in Equestria, that the night that is the night of this blissful event, he did indeed get lucky. (ft. Pharrell and Nile Rodgers)
2530604 Decedent ^_^ related through a long line of ponies, not direct. :D 2530593 huh? 2530452 Well i'll go back and see if i can find any. 2530434 There is alot that happens twards the end :D Dicord or the smexy time? 2530699 Hey now, she really thinks she is, her dad never told her the birds and da bees :3 2530325 I will try, but please give thanks to my editor as well he had done alot for this story. 2530318 Today i am catching up on anime and after i will be story boarding and then when that id down i shall be back to writing 2530317 Come now ^_^ cant we all just get along 2530295 Dance like you want too, for i start writing tomorrow 2530142 The voice inside your head shall now always be morgan freeman 2530141 :3
2530720 Discord said niece so would that me he is directly related to Cup Cake through his brother, and since his brother on did celestia wouldn't that make Cup Cake a direct not down the line? I guess it doesn't matter that much it's just funny that left Cup to screw royalty when he was doing that all along.
As soon i start reading, I read this in Morgan Freeman's Voice. Damn it me stap! I don't know if litte ODST can take more of this.
Sorry, i don't have enough of time and willpower to read 32k word chapter at once. Wait till the morning for the real comment.
31k word the hell that's as much as some books well this is going to take a while who needs sleep
Commence read, Morgan Freeman.
Okay.
So, I never asked, is that hoof mark going to scar?
2527918 Oh yah
2527908 Okay otay?
2527896 Hey its not like my 2 in the morning release like i am normally into,
2527892 Its ok, take your time.
2527850 I like your profile pic.
2526811 Thats what you get for kissing w/o chapstick, you no-tipper!
2522033 Oh and the thing about big mac....
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2524235 I never seen daddy day care
2527956 Like my pic
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here is one for mass effect
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There are a lot of references in here, and this by far is my favorite.
What... what just happened? Sat down to read this, suddenly the clock is lying to me. I felt like I just got drawn into a hour and a half movie.
This story is always worth the wait, but this mega chapter is raising the bar to asstronomical levels, and I really hope every chapter comes out this magnificent.
Cliffhanger?! NOOOO!
Carrot cake you bastard. Lol this chapter was excellent.
“Oh? What are you going to do, grab that guy to stop me? What was his name? Michael McDoesn’tExist?”
Sweet Christ on a pogo-stick, I cant decide whether to read that in Discords voice or ALucard's, both are so tempting!
...Helsing Ultimate Abridged?
Great chapter can't wait for the next.
"That perfect round fluffy ass that was now coming right towards your face. It was like a fantasy made real—Oh shit, she’s falling."
"You say cracking your fingers over you is held in a long stretch. Lyra almost came on the spot from the sound alone"
"s some old pervert who, it was tia" nice one
"you wanted a nice piece of… Cake." so...much...win
Inkie Pie. mfw I read this:
i.imgur.com/t1DOAsI.png
Y ou got out of the bed random spaces?
under to wear Cup should be "where" on "wear"
“A republican?”
Epic scene of kicking down the door too :P
FUCK NOOOO I HATE YOU CARROT, hopefully mary can usurp her authority.
you're killing me... I loved where this is going but you can't throw the whole Luna thing in there and then before hand make me promise to not have a alicorn in the herd.... its...its murder!
also... Morgan Freeman will now and forever be my dream guide.
Just finished reading and damn. I don't know what but i could hear Morgan Freeman so clear. He needs to be in the show
Damn...
I was really enjoying this, then you made celestia to be some sort of uncaring tyrant.
Dropped.
It was a good story until you pulled real life politics in, pretty much called me a "bad guy" because we don't share the same beliefs. I wish you the best and brightest of futures, good bye.
2529189 Seriously? The republican joke? Well ok then sorry you didn't like it. did you miss the catholic reference in the other chapter?
2529111 Who said she was a tyrant O.O >.> you sure read into it just a little to much but sorry you didn't like it
2529065 i guess you will have to keep reading and find out how that turns out
2529053 Remember Inkie and Blinkie where shacked up in the same hotel, i am glad you liked the one liners ^_^ there is more to come in the next chapter.
2528752 It will be a bit, having to work on it tomorrow.
2528734 My editor should that to me while we were in editing, i was like "I want to use that!" nice catch btw. I used to just go right into the tempting part.
2528437 Seriously i thought this chapter would ahve been 9000-15000 words, i was wrong
2528701 you can thank my editor for that line ^_^
2528056 thank you very much
Oh the end of the second act, and the players have being double. I really hope that scar will not last…well like he said magic is the "fuck you" of realty so I bet there must be spell for that, I'm pretty sure at least Rarity will not rest until that scar is gone. She is mad but she is still Rarity.
Great joke about the politician, and I loving that even the princesses will put their hats in the ring, I can't wait to see what move will try Celestia…no I can't wait to see the next move of all the mares, the twins the princesses, all is starting to come together.
Oh the face in Celestia when she is turn down, priceless, Frost is making history by the minute. And his reputation is about presented in court…he will need a layer, this looks like a job for…Phoenix Right! Layer extraordinary, he can save him, and if not Discord can do it
Yes, I can read it, but there are still a lot of times where you either forget a word or put in an extra letter that really fucks up the sentence and practically makes it unable to understand. Its like english isnt your first language... you damn foreigner
Loved it. The only part that I didn't like was the Republican part. Alienates too much of the reader audience, would've been better to go with politician or something that is equally generally hated on. Like lawyers or something else.
2529272
people get so butthurt. 'LOL you made fun of a demographic that doesn't include me...WTF MAN I WAS IN THAT OTHER DEMOGRAPHIC YOU MADE FUN OF! *ragequit*'
the hypocrisy
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2529309 Good call English is my third language ^_^ But im no forener i was born in the states.
2529318 I should have went with lawyer, i just took that like from a old golf game i used to play, seriously its not that much to get worked up about. Damn they should no it a joke. Il just go in and change it.
2529281 Oh there will be alot going down :3 but remember this is a clop WITH a story line. its a sexy adventure of feels. guiding you down the path of greatness, remember he is a nice guy :D
2529423 joke was changed
2529449
And that scar will be gone latter in the story?
2529449
I don't think you should. People here should be big boys, if they can't handle a pun at their expense, they shouldn't be here...considering this is a highly adult piece of literature.
2529470 :3 hehehehehe No. that scar actually has a purpose. Small but it really does.
2529482 Really? i never noticed :p But i already changed it. This time no one can take offense because im studying to become a lawyer. I want people to comment about what they love about the chapter and not about political views.
2529495
fair enough, keep up the good work
2529495
Oh i see, well lets see, he is doing a rich man a favor training her children, he officially has the mayor as herd mate, one of the princess want to be in his herd, and I bet Discord plan will not work if he is in prison. He seeing to have some cards in his side in case he goes to court
2529512 THis is the part of the story where things go downhill. But remember KoS loves leaving hints and there has been a huge hint in this story since chapter two.
2529586
Ah yeah the married issue, yeah I was wondering when Carrot was going to make his move. And this plus the elements coming, seeing to make the storm coming.
Speaking of hints, those 2 hints of Bonbon…did Frost is turning a lesbian? Because, that could a giant achievement.
And if he end up in jail, well with that little among of males in Equestria he is free of prison rape, at least male prison rape.
I don't think Discord will like Carrot Cake interfering with his 'game'.
Bitch please, Frost has the Mayor, Luna, Cup, Dazzle and Pinkie on his side, how long do you think he is going to be locked away?
and then mayor mare granted them an aditional thrity days and noted carrot cakes overlooked record for abuse.
2529272 It will be worth the wait
2529730 HA - :3 thats not happening no dus es machina in this story
2529716 who knows i guess you will have to keep reading to find out.
2529650 Discord isnt allowed to interfere, He cant touch Carrot
carrot: Get the fuck out
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I had a good day and I go to here to see a new update
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Reading the shit out of this
When "I" walk out on that offer
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had to do what "I" had to do
the end though
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Whiskey Tango Foxtrot... Fucking Carrot needs to be taken out to the tree line and beaten within an inch of his life.
2529272 I really dont wanna be that guy but..
Stop being a little bitch and ask him when we're gettin' more!
...ok...when can we expect another update?
don't hurt me
*runs and cowers in a corner*
Also, this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Keep up the good work buddy.
My reaction towards the end of the chapter:
Jesus, we're going in hard!!! -puts on Daft Punk helmet- Strap in!!! -squeak-
You need to have it run through an editor a couple more times, still way to many errors, mostly missing words. Otherwise, nice chapter
2530434
I think the term is that our human in Equestria, that the night that is the night of this blissful event, he did indeed get lucky. (ft. Pharrell and Nile Rodgers)
Did anyone else catch the hint that Cup cake is Celestia's daughter?
2530604 Decedent ^_^ related through a long line of ponies, not direct. :D
2530593 huh?
2530452 Well i'll go back and see if i can find any.
2530434 There is alot that happens twards the end :D Dicord or the smexy time?
2530699 Hey now, she really thinks she is, her dad never told her the birds and da bees :3
2530325 I will try, but please give thanks to my editor as well he had done alot for this story.
2530318 Today i am catching up on anime and after i will be story boarding and then when that id down i shall be back to writing
2530317 Come now ^_^ cant we all just get along
2530295 Dance like you want too, for i start writing tomorrow
2530142 The voice inside your head shall now always be morgan freeman
2530141 :3
2530720 Discord said niece so would that me he is directly related to Cup Cake through his brother, and since his brother on did celestia wouldn't that make Cup Cake a direct not down the line? I guess it doesn't matter that much it's just funny that left Cup to screw royalty when he was doing that all along.
2530730 No, discord's neices lives 5 hourses down from Fluttershy's
Sorry but its not Cup Cake