• Member Since 22nd Dec, 2011
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Ranger Roger


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References!! I seez them :pinkiecrazy:
"Your name motherfucker! Do you know it?"

Fuck sake, we need an Aaron Griffin somewhere in all of this!

By the way, are the Locust poni-fied or are they the same as the ones on Sera?

165323 Like the ones on Sera. (Pre-Reader here :D)

This...is freakin awesome!! I'm already picking favorites in this story, with Mac being my #1 so far. I kind of picture him to be like Macmillan from Call of Duty: Modern Warfare. Tank reminds me of...well...a tank. And I'm assuming Phoenix is supposed to be Marcus in this story. Characters aside, this is looking to be a really great story, and that's coming from a dedicated Gears fan.

165346Yah, Mac is not Big Mac though he comes in later. Your right about Pot McShot being like Cpt. MacMillan, but I hear his voice as him from MW3.

When the locust saw them, and yelled "PONIES!!", I just burst out laughing! :rainbowlaugh: i can just picture it perfectly, and a locust yelling ponies... priceless.:trixieshiftleft:

165364 I kinda guessed that, since he wasn't described as Big Mac at all. I'm just gonna guess Big Mac'll be the Tai-type character of this story, a.k.a. the strong, silent one.

165690I'm kind going by the games for the timeline so this would be like gears one. And I'm going to show who Big Mac is in the next chapter.

165780 Gotcha. Looking forward to it.

Nicely done. I can finally match these guys to characters now. Speaking of which, I noticed you called Tank "Cole" during the flashback. Just something I wanted to point out, since I assume you got that particular flashback from one of the books. Also, nice job with Big Mac's character. Strong, silent type...except for the very in-depth weapon analysis. Somewhat fitting.

Prescolt
Hoofman

Damn puns :ajbemused:

In all seriousness, I am loving this story!

Ok I've seen some good crossover Ideas by bad authors but this is a awesome crossover bye a kick ass author

Nicely done. Finally we find Ken-...I mean Carm-...I mean Carbine make an appearance. And Derpy making the Hammer...yeah, I can see that.

damn it my epic battle music just changed to what I'd call relaxing lake music have a link and go to about 9:13 and you'll hear what I mean

173060You'll just have to wait but trust me it's worth it.:trollestia:

Hey everyone, I'm taking a pole, kinda. Let me know if you liked the story so far or if you think I should fix some things in the future. I'm also taking ideas so feel free to send em' in. Thanks:ajsmug:

If anyone is interested, I need a new proofreader for my story :pinkiehappy:

I'm at the FUCKING gala. :rainbowlaugh:

This just gets better and better. I cracked up when Mac sniped the Reaver rider. Also, I first thought that the main squad was just a ponified version of Gears's Delta squad, but I LOVE the fact that they are their own separate entity. This is looking like a Gears 1.5 in the sense that this intertwines with the actual Gears events, which is what I assume you intended it to be.

Professor Derpy Hooves? :derpyderp1:
I mean really PROFESSOR Derpy Hooves. I had to read that paragraph about 13 times just to make sure I read it right. And I still cant imagine it.
I mean.... its just.....:facehoof:

PINKIE PIE IS HERE!!!!!1:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

198288 she focused all her derps into making the ultimate herp weapon lol:derpytongue2:

198413 Its just that i cant even see her doing construction after episode 14, demolition maybe, but a scientist is taking it way too far. :derpyderp2:

The orbital strike cannon should be renamed the orbital friendship cannon.:rainbowdetermined2:

198639 Your right it would make more sense but, with everything that's going on there's not much friendship anymore, plus the whole thing was just thrown in for comity. :pinkiecrazy:

199560 well that makes sense.... kinda.:pinkiesmile:
But now that we've met pinkie:pinkiehappy: and applejack:ajsmug: im waiting for rainbowdash:rainbowderp: and fluttershy:yay: to make thier appearance.
BTW who is the Dom of this story? has he not appeard yet or is he jackknife cause their stories are similar.

(Spoiler):fluttershyouch: Rainbow and Fluttershy don't come in until the third story. The story is essentially the first Gears of War from a different squad's point of view although the characters are similar to Delta squad they are there own characters. Marcus, Dom, Cole, and Baird are all in the story and are ponified and doing their own:pinkiesmile: thing in the story and will be introduced near the end.

206569 I knew you could figure it out! I always believed in you. :rainbowlaugh:

God damn you English is my second language....BULLSHIT. why you make a new account
:twilightangry2:

206577 err...english is my second language. How did you not know that? :rainbowlaugh:
Anyway, because I'm an asshole.

206589 it's that whole irish thing, LADDY!

just saying I BUCKING LOVE THIS!! :raritywink:

LOL raam commenting on his hatred of ponies

This story is good, I like how you put the Gears one campaign in there.
You deserve this, :moustache:
Also:
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Marcus Approves.

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