Also on Fanfiction.net under the username "HaterAid" The Doctor drops into Derpy's life. Literally. As he struggles to get used to a new body, Derpy struggles to help in any way possible.
Now he's on a mission to save the universe. Well, two universes. Sort of a big ball of wibbly, wobbly- you know the rest.
Listed as 'Human' but it doesn't start out that way. I would tell you why, but...
Spoilers.
Page generated in 0.086 seconds
Total duration
864 users online
1,364,329 hits today, 2,151,698 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Okay, not bad at all. I just have one thing to say, and it might well be just a personal thing. Applejack is one word, one capitalized letter, the 'A', not AppleJack as you have it. Other than that, this is a good looking story, and I'm watching it.
Really interesting story, I love how the Doctor is taking this all in his stride! I look forward to more :)
2050228 Thanks I wasn't sure about that at first :D
ehhh....
Well, the writing is good, although there were a few grammatical and spelling mistakes... Hmmm...
The premise is a bit over used though...
All in All, good story, but I'm not gonna be fawning over it. A big Thumbs Neutral to you!
All in all a good story but i'm curious how is derpy able to hear the tardis speak