Multi-chapter mature romance featuring the mane 6 and a changeling?
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EDIT: But also done before. Good to see that other writers and readers don't shy away from mature changeling romances.

Very, very well written. INSTA-FAVE.

I was tempted to ask if you only plan to write sad and tragedy stories on this account.

This will be interesting i guess, Twilight x Changeling will be the main ship i guess?

Oh my, it begins
Tracking

This is so awesome!
Another chapter soon?

A good idea looking forward to see what you intent to do with it.

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Not If I use Newest First!

Well now. I must say I like this concept, although I don't recognize the pony who caused Peili's epiphany.
I'm looking forward to where this goes...and what happens when the rest of the Mane 6 discovers Twilight is living with a stallion (Peili sounds male, and seems to prefer male forms) sent by the princess...and then discovering he's a changeling.

I can't wait to see where this goes from here. I like it so far.

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I think she is going to know because the princess says to use a disuse only when he is not interacting at the library.

You will need to keep your head down, and find a form that you can wear on an everyday basis whenever interaction with ponies outside of my student is necessary.

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Oh yes, Twilight will know Peili is a Changeling...but her friends won't. So here's the rest of the Mane 6's perspective.
A stranger stallion from Canterlot comes to Ponyville and immediately moves in with Twilight, and Spike has been sworn to secrecy about it. What are they likely to think, considering how secretive Twilight has been in the past regarding her life in Canterlot (not mentioning that she had a brother, or that he was captain of the royal guard)?

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Heh, yeah. I can't wait.

Amazing...
Simply amazing...

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Love cannon online.

2020218 i only have to imagine rarity's reaction to him moving in with her lol

You have piqued my curiosity.

Impressive short starting chapter, sure got my interest.

I am looking forward>>2020218 to updates.

This will be AWKWARD
Twilight: " for the last time I tell you girls, he is not my special some-pony "

Not an entirely original concept, "changeling moves to Ponyville", but you've certainly got a measure of talent that makes this worth reading. I'll be waiting for more in the near future.

Very good start indeed, I'm already hooked. Will be interesting to see where you will go with this. Points to you good sir if you purposefully named your characters Peili and Kuva - they are Finnish words for mirror and image, respectively.

Wow, this story is picking up likes fast! I'll read it now, and keep procrastinating on my college papers and magic training.

So good, keep writing this

Howabout MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm definitely tracking this.

Very sweet.

(Joke) Alt. Title: You Say You Want An Evol-Ooh-Tion?!

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Now imagine Pinkie's.

2022030 I don't have to it is a no brainer PARTY. first she be like then she will be like then she will be like and finally

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I bet Rainbow's first reaction to Peili - whatever his form - is something like this:

2022132 maybe after he is revealed to be a changling since he would already have been vouched for by the princess

She only mentioned Twilight's name and the town she lives in.

Great story. I shall get back to reading the rest of chapter one.

> Kuva had always had a rather filthy mouth.... I never understood the habit, myself.

> Dammit

Odd juxtaposition. I suppose the habit is letting it out?

And sheesh, Pony security is extremely lax.

I am loving the concept and story telling so far, so all I need to know is this: you have the sex tag, but why? Simply jokes, innuendos, etc. from Twilight's friends or do you go along with the others who have the Mane 6 as sexually active as regular animals?

2022266 you sure do like pictures dont you?

I LOVE THIS!!! keep up the great work, and... happy to see that atleast he wasnt killed (yet)

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To clarify on the sex tag, I plan on including sexually explicit material at a later point in the story, as well as having the cast in general make jokes.

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Okay, I don't have a problem with explicit sex, I just don't like stories that portray the Mane 6 as sluts or whatever. It kind of feels like defacing a hero/role model.

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I don't have it in me to write a story like that, any explicit material I write is as sensual as I can make it.

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I'm guessing Xenophilia is in your faves then?

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I've never actually heard of that story, but thanks for the recommendation!

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Of course, that's assuming Twilight manages to tell the others that Peili is sent by the Princess BEFORE they jump to conclusions.

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Let me know when your heart explodes from the D'Aaaaawwwws.

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Yes, yes I do. I think I have a gif for that. Would you like to see it?

2022433 lol that would be funny wouldnt it

You must REALLY LOVE your first posts... Hmmm. Probably almost as much as I enjoy my own pastimes.

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Hey bro, let's chill out.

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My most sincere regrets, dear sir author. I can only hope that this does not take away from your inspiratory muse. Please, continue with your excellent work. I will try to avoid burning away your precious time, which can be better diverted to more enjoyable and productive passtimes. Like writing more chapters of this excellent story.

Intresting....I FAVE!!!

This is great, I shall await for more chapters!

I like where this is going.