This kicked major flank! Nice touch at the end too with the song!~ Blueblood made me smack the table and scream "WHY?!" I hope he gets what he deserves All in all? 10/10 /)

100/10 friend! This was excellent! One of the best fics I've read on this site!

2038869 You need to go read After That Fateful Night, Clockwork, or one of numerous other better fics then lol

But seriously, thanks for the compliment!

I'm sorry, but this is just so badly written I had to laugh on several occasions. It should be tagged "Random".

2095646 Here's a novel idea, rather than say that, how about you point some of the problems out to me, then I try to fix them, and you know, do something productive?

Just a thought, because so far the most random thing is your post...

This was really well done :3 the fact that you implemented an original character and made it a really awesome fiction says something about the kind of writer you are. It was well laid out and enjoyable even though it was extremely dark (I like those anyway). I approve of this fiction and keep up the good work~