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Lost

She's gone. Gone forever, and no pony can do anything do anything about that.

yeah a little vague, anyway, this is my first story so tell me what you like, don't like etc...

I'll add more character sprites or whatever as they appear in the story

Chapters (3)

the tragedy · 19th Jan 2012 · 1,447 words
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The Fall · 20th Jan 2012 · 2,759 words
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the Rise · 6th Feb 2012 · 1,787 words
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FauxFox

FauxFox #1 · Feb 6th, 2012 · · · the tragedy ·

Dark man, few mistakes here and there but good all in all.

Psyduck64

Psyduck64 #2 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · · the Rise ·

192082 thanks! the mistakes, well, i don't check my work over all too carefully, although, now that other people are reading it i think i might have too