Twilight came back from an exhausting day at Sweet Apple Acres and she just wantet to rest. But Spike had a long day to think about things so he had many questions to ask Twilight. Twilight got mad and used King Sombra's black magic to make him feel pain. Lil' Miss Rarity has also a little part in there :)
bit to fast but me like
"But Spike had a long day to think about things so he had many questions to ask Twilight."
Is that right?
1867955 yes of course. I'll change it.
1867948 thanks
1868107 no prob
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Perfect.
I enjoyed this.
1868133 oh thank you
That description...
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Seemed a very rushed story. Great concept, everyone has to fight with the insanity within themselves.
I'm liking this story.
It doesn't matter to me if the story has technical, spelling, or grammatical errors. I'm more interested in the story-line. Hopefully, you'll keep writing more chapters for this.