Star Sparkle. Accomplished author, diplomat, historian and mother to one of the most famous mares in Equestrian history. She has no regrets, but she does have a problem: she ran out of gin last night. And her daughter is marrying an ape.
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TIL I never upvoted this
Oh, hell yes. I was just thinking about this story after dealing with my relatives for a bit.
Star Sparkle... seems like a right bitch. I hope someone slaps some sense into her.
Arch, i'm glad to see my continued nagging for more chapters has paid off.
Now if only we could learn more about Star's siblings
As strong as Star's characterization is, it's actually amazing that she ever had any friends, let alone a herd. She sounds like such a chore to deal with, especially for family. Twilight, who clearly takes after her mother, was less aggressively anti-social and learned to mellow out after going to Ponyville. Star just seems like the same tough bitch [said with the highest possible respect] she always was.
Also, I think I read somewhere that, in this universe, Twilight had other siblings besides Shining Armor. Even if you're not following that particular continuity, it's still an interesting idea. Any chance of meeting them at some point?
Good to have you back in the proverbial saddle, Arch. Especially given what we have here. I hadn't realize how much I'd missed this universe and its unique inhabitants. Incorporating data from "Amending Fences" really added to it, as did the subtle implications regarding Twilight and a certain showmare.
And Star isn't wrong. Twilight really will be very fond of telling ponies what to think. She'll just be a lot nicer about it than her mother.
That said, I have to wonder what sent Twilight back up her lonely tower by the time of the thousandth Summer Sun Celebration...
I love your characterizations so much. You managed to make what could have been a routine scene very engaging.
7909675 welp
7909999 That's an interesting reaction. I hope they aren't as bad as all that.
7910469 It is planned! Somewhere. Next chapter is going to see most of the family in one place for once, instead of just bits of it. Also Princess Luna. Fun!
7911095 She used to be nicer, a long time ago, but... ah that would be telling.
They're going to show up soon, yes. They've been hinted at a few times in other chapters.
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Too many ponies, not enough books to hide behind, and a herd that expects things she's not quite ready to give them yet.
And ah yes, the implications... second cousins are legal, right?
7913585 I'm glad you said that. I've often wondered what people like about this fic - and why they keep coming back after so long. It helps to hear.
glad to see this update.
7914143 >Next chapter is going to see most of the family in one place for once, instead of just bits of it.
Twilight's family or Stars? Honestly i want to see what her immediate family thinks of Lero the most. I can imagine how well that would go, and id bet youd do it fantastically.
It's good to be reading another of these. And weird-yet-fitting to see Twilight in a college setting.
Lyra is not nearly as wild as some other xeno stories describe her youth. So college Twilight is neat, wonder if she is an active alumni.
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It's not amazing, it's mindbogglingly stupid.
All the drama in this tale relies entirely on the fact that all of the "characters" swoon and make excuses for Star, even moments after they've been sexually assaulted by her. Everything in this story points to the fact that Star has never treated anyone with any level of respect, and is fundamentally incapable of interacting with other living beings without doing intentional harm to them, and yet we're supposed to believe that this psychopath has enough support to not only have a highly privileged position within her university, but is also able to rob the leader of her nation with absolutely no consequence? It's not bad ass, or sympathetic, just garbage writing.
At least Cupcakes never pretended to be anything other than torture porn.