A story staring a small time actor Star Struck and his long time best bro C.J the banker. Both just expected their lives to be simple and straight forward but with Star Struck's rising popularity and his attempts to find his own marefriend, tension arises between the bro's.
rating of teen for the occasional innuendo and slightly more mature content
-just throwing it out their, tis my first story, so of course suggestions and criticism are welcomed
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1729922 Allow me
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I dunno, man, this was a solid concept and in my top ten favourite pieces of writing.
1729946 Well played.
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But we're not allowed to hate things! We have to tell the authors how much we loved their stories now!
Dat format. I ca- I can't.
It's making me writhe in agony.
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With some proper formatting and punctuation, the brotherly relationship between Star Struck and C.J could really be highlighted. The emotional response might be the same as My Little Dashie.
*Sees title* " Well there goes the new name to my OC pony again" but it's really good! Keep it up!
1729961 I hated everything before I joined the TWE, and I'm not gonna stop now that it's dead
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But we can't do that anymore, or we'll get banned!
1730078 The TWE doesn't exist. Therefore, I'm not a member. Therefore, FUCK THE WORLD!
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But all thinly-veiled insults (constructive criticism) are bannable offenses!
1730095 I'm safe, then. That's not even CLOSE to veiled
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I like the way you think
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Well, it doesn't like you.
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