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Blurry Sights


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When Twilight stumbles upon a mysterious book, she takes it and tries to discover what it is. When she finds out that this is no ordinary reading material, she placed on a decision to learn for a price. Will she accept and succumb to the darkening or will she be able to fend this temptation away?

Note: This is currently my first pony fic, so constructive criticisms is happily accepted and highly appreciated.

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Comments ( 3 )

Books are dangerous. That's why you should watch TV.

Well, you seem to have a solid basis here, but I'm not gonna lie - it could certainly use some tidying.

1708130 Well yeah.. I have been getting that feedback a lot before, I really need to find a proofreader for my work. Well nonetheless I'll keep writing anyway.:twilightsheepish:

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