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Nocturne of Peace

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Regidar

Regidar #1 · Nov 30th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 - 'Never so simple' ·

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snipertwilight5

snipertwilight5 #2 · Nov 30th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 - 'And into greener pastures' ·

pretty good so far but you need to indent and check for spelling and grammer errors

Hawk0413

Hawk0413 #3 · Dec 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 - 'Never so simple' ·

Okay I'm not sure about my indent as you say, but I am sure that i had my spelling fixed and the grammar somewhat correct

Hawk0413

Hawk0413 #4 · Feb 8th, 2013 · · · Chapter 2 - 'Never so simple' ·

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By the way....Grammar isn't spelled 'grammer' so.....yea

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