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Slender Dash


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Rainbow Dash's cutie Mark story is believable enough. But is it the truth? No, it''s not, and this is the story of how she really got her famous cutie mark known for being fast and furious.

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I got a broner just to let you knlw

1685822

Thanks for the criticism! It is much appreciated. This is my second fan fiction, so I'm still fairly new at this. I can see where you are coming from, with weak plot. I would say so too.

As for Cherry Tart randomly coming back to haunt her, well, Rainbow Dash remembers her every time she tells the story, and this time, when she had the dream, she was remorseful, and decided not to hide the real story from anyone anymore.

This was kind of a quick write, so I didn't expect it to be my best. I finished it in one night, soo :pinkiecrazy:

1685822
I read the comments before the story, so thanks for the plot summary there, Doctor. :ajbemused:

1689870

Dude, you are like my favorite person on this site now. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:

1685764 You got a broner...from reading about Rainbow Dash, flying really fast....for her sister....:rainbowhuh:

1689870
well this is awkward
I guess sometimes you have to sacrifice things to make a point :twilightoops:

1691986

I have deleted your previous comment. Don't worry, I read it, and fully understand. But ChewyJiggles is right, you kinda spoiled the "not-so-good" story.

I just deleted it to prevent someone reading the comments and getting the story spoiled from happening again. :twilightblush:

Slender Dash... you are an amazing person. I just wanted to let you know that.

1690691 i couldnt stop crying best fimfic ever :fluttercry:

1695356

I wouldn't say the best person ever....just the best writer :rainbowlaugh:

1697776
Wow, really? I'm happy,then, not because you cried, but because that was the point and
i guess I put enough emotion into it! See, telling someone you cried is two forms of a compliment! So thanks!:pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy:

>> slender dash
best storie evah!:raritystarry:

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