Can You Hear Them?
“Ugh.” Twilight Sparkle was not having a good day. She had woken up with a migraine and the way her head was pounding was making it impossible to study. To make matters worse, the painkillers she had taken earlier weren’t helping at all.
“That it,” she decided, “I’m using magic.” Her horn glowed and she felt her headache subside, replacing it with a drained feeling. She gave a sigh of relief.
“I should have done that sooner.” she decided, “I’d rather feel drained than be in pain. Huh, that rhymed.” Now that the head-splitting pain was gone, she turned her attention back to her books.
Twilight read for a few more minutes before the door to the basement slammed opened. Turning her head she saw Spike enter the main floor of the library, carrying something in his claws.
“Hay Twi,” asked Spike as he held out something for Twilight to see, “What’s this?”
“That’s my old fob watch,” Twilight replied with disinterest. “I haven’t seen this in years. Where did you find it?”
“It was in one of the boxes down stairs. I was cleaning the place up, like you asked, and it fell out of the box I was moving. It looked cool so I kept it out.”
“Yes, it is.” Twilight levitated the watch out of the dragon’s grip and examined it closer. “I have always found the designs on it interesting. It is a very good piece of craftsmanship.”
“Where did you get it?” asked spike.
“I’ve always had it,” replied Twilight. She turned around and put the watch on a nearby shelf. “I guess my parents gave it to me?”
“You guess?”
“Yeh,” sighed Twilight as she stared at the watch. “Mom and Dad told me that I had it on me when the orphanage found m…”
“Wait a minute,” interrupted Spike. “You’re adopted?!”
“Yes,” said Twilight, turning around, a look of confusion adorning her face. “Didn’t I tell you that already?”
“No.”
“…Oh.” Twilight paused. An uncomfortable silence began building between them. Right before Spike was about to break the silence, she continued. “Ok. Well, now you know. I’m adopted. Shining is too.”
“You’re both adopted?!”
“Yes. As it turns out, Mom is infertile.”
“Dang, that’s rough,” said Spike, a look of sympathy on his face. “I’m sorry to hear that.”
Twilight waved her hoof dismissingly. “They came to terms with it a long time ago.”
“That’s good,” said Spike. “Still, you look a lot like you mother. I never would have guessed you weren’t related.”
“Ya, we do look alike,” mused Twilight. “They were so surprised by the simularities that when they adopted me they got the doctors to give me a DNA test to see if I was some long lost niece they never knew about.”
“Wow, that’s pretty neat.” Turning his attention back to the watch behind Twilight he asked, “But to get us back on topic, why haven’t I ever seen you use that watch?”
“It’s broken,” said Twilight. “It has been for as long as I can remember. To tell you the truth, I’ve never really thought much about it before.”
“Did you ever think about getting it fi…?”
Spike was cut off as the front door slammed open. Rarity walked in yelling, “Twilight, Spike! Are you there?”
“R-R-R-Rarity.” Spike’s eyes glazed over at the sight of his crush, his cheeks turning red.
“Twilight, there you are darling.” said Rarity. Twilight could immediately tell by the grin Rarity was giving her that she wanted something.
“Hi Rarity,” began Twilight, “How are you doing?”
“Oh, I am doing just fine. But I'm afraid to say that I've come to ask a favor of you.”
“Anything you want, Rarity.” said Spike as he continued to stare dreamily at his crush. Rolling her eyes at her assistance’s behavior, Twilight turned her attention back to Rarity.
“Sure Rarity. What do you need?”
“Well,” began Rarity, “I just need to take Spikey-Wikey off of your hands for a few hours. You see I am all out of emeralds and I need his help to get more so that I can finish up my new project.”
“Please Twilight!” begged Spike as he threw himself in front of her. “Can I go? PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlea…”
“Alright, alright,” said Twilight, interrupting his pleading, “You can go.”
“Thank you, Twilight!” beamed Spike.
“I’ll have him back in a few hours. You won’t need to worry about a thing.” reassured Rarity.
“Alright.” Twilight watched as the pair left the library and then turned her attention back to the shelf. Once again picking up the old gold watch she studied the complex design on the front.
'BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBu…’
Shaking her head, Twilight set the fob watch back on the shelf and left the room. The beating was getting louder. Now that she thought about it, the beating always seemed to get louder when she was close to it. She had never really thought about it before. Then again, it was almost as if the watch wasn’t even there. She had that since she was a small filly, yet looking back, she could hardly remember it at all. It had always been with her, yet at the same time it never was.
'BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBu…'
“Stupid drums,” she said to herself. She had been hearing that beat for her entire life. It had its ups and downs, but it always seemed to get worse when she was near that watch. Now that she thought about it, she couldn’t believe that it never occurred to her before that they could be related.
“That watch.” Twilight turned around and looked back into the room where the watch sat. Slowly, she walked back into the room and approached the broken fob watch.
‘BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBu…’
“I’ve never actually opened it before...” Twilight slowly picked up the old watch, her gaze was transfixed on its tarnished gold surface.
‘The Time Vortex…Regeneration…The drums, the drums, the never ending drumbeat…’
“I’ve never really even looked at it. For all these years…”
‘Open me you foal. Open the light and summon me up and receive my majesty!’
“M-Maybe I should…”
‘BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum…’
A voice in the back of Twilight’s mind was telling her not to. It was telling her to cast the watch aside and to forget about its existence.
‘BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum…’
But as the pounding in her ears increased, that voice was drowned out.
‘BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum BumBumBumBum…’
‘Open me! Open me and reclaim what you once were!’
Twilight opened her old, tarnished watch. Her mind was blank as she was blinded by a bright golden light.
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The Drums told me to write this! I swear!
Listen to the Drums.
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Um, your quotations in the description are odd.
Just delete this comment if you want!
Looks interesting so far. Twilight as the master, I'm definitely watching this.
You bastard, I'm going to be hearing those drums all day now.
Twilight as the master has a shot of being quite good.
Hmm. I'll track this, but you need to watch your punctuation after dialogue. If you're using speech tags (he said, she said) you use a comma, question mark, or exclamation mark. Only us a period if the following sentence stands on its own. Also, if you DO use the speech tags, the next word isn't capitalized.
"I liked this story," he said.
"I REALLY loved this story!" he yelled.
"I... liked... this story?" he whispered.
"I liked this story." After typing the comment, Jake sat back in his chair.
Other than that, I really DID like this!
The drumming. Can't you hear it? Inside my head. I thought it would stop. But it never does. It never, ever stops. Inside my head. The drumming, Doctor, the constant drumming. It's everywhere. Listen. Listen. Listen. Here come the drums... here come... the drums.
I is interested...
Tap tap tap tap. Tap tap tap tap. Tap tap tap tap.
I don't know what it is about [this story]. It's just... It's like [it] just pulls you in. Do continue.
funny i was listening to this as reading it
THIS WOULDN'T BE A STORY WITHOUT ME!
Just dropping in to say hi, and good fic!
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interesting, I'll follow this to see were it goes
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Thanks! I will fix that in the next update.
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Fixed it. Thank you for pointing that out.
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The song that inspired the story.
1619178 the drumming is everywhere
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Heh heh heh
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That was awsome!
It is always nice when some one dedicates a fic to my cause. The Master approves.
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PROLOGUE:
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Sigh. Don't ask me why, but this was the first thing my mind went to from the title and description.
Will still read, though.
The story is a bit strange, but I guess it has to be because you want twilight as the master...
The way its written is more tell then show, but that doesn't take to much away from the story...
Twilight is out of character, but then again she is the master...
I like Spike...
And Lastly, this story is based around the Master and not the Doctor. Which is exactly why this is going to be amazing!
Faved, Liked, Commented! 8/10 wouldn't bang, but it is a great concept and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
I give this story two thumbs up.
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1618943 This is incredibly weird. I'm listening to Silence and the End of All Things right now. Hooory sheeeet!
Finally a Master story
Update soon
yey
*DING* ...
OH Snap... my Timey-Wimey Detector just went off... It goes 'ding' when there's stuff...
Faved and followed...
Yes! So we have Pinkie, twilight, and who knows what else. Yay! Twilight's the master. since the Toclefane were never seen again, I chose the Vashta Nerada as my favorite monster. The master seems to take the cake as best villain. It was nearly impossible to beat him with the toclefane by his side.
1620482 the traveling man is the best man
the only problem I have with this is the perception filter that would have kept her from opening it on her own, she'd need another person to at least push her in the direction of opening it, and I don't think that spike's interaction cuts it.
Out of all of the bad guys out there the Master is, with out a doubt, the most terrifying and horrible of them all.
The phrase 'great and terrible' sums up this concept quite well. I'm feeling and at the same time.
Twilight was the Element of Magic/Friendship. Once she resumes being the Master, will the Element reject her or will it corrupt? So many possibilities. So much FUN!
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I plan to. I'm halfway done writing the second chapter.
Now I hope I just don't mess up.
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I didn't even think about that. Thank you for informing me about this perfect plot point!
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My crackfic sence is tingling.
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I shall not fail you...I hope...Wish me luck!
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Ya, I think I messed up there.
Lost me at this:
>>“Yeh,” sighed Twilight as she stared at the watch. “Mom and Dad told me that I had it on me when the orphanage found m…”
“Wait a minute,” interrupted Spike. “You’re adopted?!”
“Yes,” said Twilight, turning around, a look of confusion adorning her face. “Didn’t I tell you that already?”
“No.”
“…Oh.” Twilight paused. An uncomfortable silence began building between them. Right before Spike was about to break the silence, she continued. “Ok. Well, now you know. I’m adopted. Shining is too.”
“You’re both adopted?!”
“Yes. As it turns out, Mom is infertile.”>>>
But I forced myself along since the chapters are (thankfully) brief. It does not improve at all in terms of plausibility, believability, or a sense of genuineness.
There's 'alt universe', and then there's just contrived absurdity. This is the latter. You just throw this all on the page, no character introductions, no mood setting, no tonality. Just BLAM, THIS IS MY FANON!!
Show, don't tell. And take the time to craft the world in your story. This very hastily thrown together.