The story of the everyday life of a human hired by mares to provide comfort for their needs, all the while exploring Equestrian life through the eyes of his customers. Set in the Gentlemanverse.
It's 1:30 AM over here, and JUST as I'm about to close shop, i get an update from fimfiction. Thanks at least for giving me something to look forward to in the morning.
Damn. I JUST finished reading the new chapter of another favorite story a little bit ago. Now, like 10 minutes later, here comes this. It's like I'm having a little birthday or something.
Love it. Some EoH are angry with Him, we see more of the hidden problems with ponies and their culture. Rarity being pretty perceptive about humans in her choice of attire.. Delicious.
And that last bit, Rarity's scheming at work, will force Eve and Harry to do something about their statu-quo. Cant wait.
If the Changelings wanted love, maybe they should have worked on their bedroom skills.
[insert laugh track here]
Though, I do have to wonder if the dead Changelings are connected to the presence of humans. I guess with all the mares going to GfM, there aren't that many for Changelings to prey on?
Yeah. One thing I wanted to do was try and avoid the common HiE cliches. Having some of the Mane Six not completely liking the human character always felt interesting.
And yes, the epilogue will most likely be about Eve and Harry. Can't wait.
Most likely because when I started this story, I had no real idea where it was going to go. It was present when I first started it out, but removed it when I realised most chapters would mostly likely be about Harry and his customers.
That in itself is debatable if its Romantic or not.
Those silly ponies in Ponyville have no idea what they're missing out on. At least Cherrilee and Rarity can flaunt what a good time they had and make the other mares whine and wallow in... whatever ponies wallow in.
Even if this story ends for Wingman (teethmarks or not) I do hope this is not the end for Gentlemen. There's such a rich world built up, ripe for the plucking.
Well, I'm going to make the Changeling fic first and put out another story with Wingman/Harry after that. Then there's also Feathered Heart to work on as well. God, even if I complete this story, there's many more to come.
Reward for hard work is definitely... more hard work.
Aw the story is almost over? Well, it was a interesting read for damn sure and I can't wait to see how it ends. Also, for a second there I thought Rarity was a changeling when Harry started to see Eve.
Is Eve jealous at the end there with Rarity kissing Harry?
So Pinkie Pie is in the final chapter? If Pinkie Pie likes Harry, that be the case I think Ponyville won't be as dangerous as before for him.
Hopefully Sea Swirl and Harry, say sorry to each (Not get back together. That would just be silly happen in a weird parallel universe.) other and at least be civil to each other.
I was kinda trolling when I put the preview with Pinkie. She was a... distraction, to say the least. She wasn't going to make an appearance in this story. But who knows. I may finally be brave enough to write her in the future.
I wish I could upvote individual chapters additionally.
That was beautiful worldbuilding! You incorporated Rarity's monogamous family, turning them into a believable part of your Equestria, and also explained how it produced the almost aggresively feminine Rarity and her desires and MO (for instance, why she doesn't outright reject Spike), as well as the results of her ill-fated meeting with Prince Blueblood. You even had her mention their second meeting, something not often seen, and her ultimate problem of having a reputation as being too traditional (i.e. chauvinistic)!
Just...god dammit...I can't take all this win. I've been looking forward to the chapter with Rarity ever since you hinted at it and DAMN did you not disappoint. Rarity's my fav of the Mane 6 and you just nailed her personality. The perfect character to have Harry fess up to. Just...ugh...every syllable of this was flawless. Can't WAIT to see how this ends.
And that little thing Rarity did at the end of the chapter? Yes....yesyesyesyesyes.
N-... No... No.... NoooooooO! I don't want it to end! *Drops to his knees and stares at the wet muddy ground*
Brilliant chapter. I'm running through all the possibilities of what could happen and whether Sea Swirl gets told in the end. She passed up a catch and a half!
It's 1:30 AM over here, and JUST as I'm about to close shop, i get an update from fimfiction.
Thanks at least for giving me something to look forward to in the morning.
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No problem. 5:30 AM here. XD About to sleep.
Damn. I JUST finished reading the new chapter of another favorite story a little bit ago. Now, like 10 minutes later, here comes this. It's like I'm having a little birthday or something.
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Merry Christmas? XD
10: 40 PM here in Ireland.
I was looking forward to this update.
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Nice. Glad I got that out before midnight.
Unless you're like me... sleeping in the morning instead of night.
Well done at making yet another chapter erotically classy!
it cant be over! this... is unacceptable. also great chapter.
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I'm slowly, but surely improving. XD
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Smack that Harry. XD
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Harry's story will continue. ^_^ No worries.
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Sense cancelling field?
There's only one thing I can say to you, Rarity...
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Rarity the matchmaker eh?
That should be "It's".
Also, update. wooooooooooooooo
Yay, moar emotional conflicts!
What else can I say but "well done"? Another great chapter!
Excellent work, as always.
Love it. Some EoH are angry with Him, we see more of the hidden problems with ponies and their culture. Rarity being pretty perceptive about humans in her choice of attire.. Delicious.
And that last bit, Rarity's scheming at work, will force Eve and Harry to do something about their statu-quo. Cant wait.
Hmm... for a second there I thought Rarity was a changeling. Nevermind. That was a pretty sneaky way for her to force Harry to confront the Eve issue.
Woah, the end? Already? I can't imagine how this will end. It seems like the story is still in the middle. I'll guess I'll just have to see.
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I felt, out of all the Elements, she would be the best choice for that particular venture.
Plus... its Rarity. Come on. XD
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Hope you'll enjoy it.
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Corrected. Thanks.
3030101 What was that? Come on Rarity?
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If the Changelings wanted love, maybe they should have worked on their bedroom skills.
[insert laugh track here]
Though, I do have to wonder if the dead Changelings are connected to the presence of humans. I guess with all the mares going to GfM, there aren't that many for Changelings to prey on?
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Yeah. Its been like emotional since the Cheerilee chapters.
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Thanks guys. Glad you liked it.
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Haha. Maybe Rarity short circuited it enough?
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Yeah. One thing I wanted to do was try and avoid the common HiE cliches. Having some of the Mane Six not completely liking the human character always felt interesting.
And yes, the epilogue will most likely be about Eve and Harry. Can't wait.
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Changelings come later.
3030121 Though, I'm quite puzzled... why is there no 'Romance tag' in this story? This deserves all of the romance tag in the world.
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I felt I the overall theme of Harry's adventures coming after this was far too different than what was presented here in the story. ^_^
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Maybe. XD
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Changeling news is for my planned Changeling fic.
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Most likely because when I started this story, I had no real idea where it was going to go. It was present when I first started it out, but removed it when I realised most chapters would mostly likely be about Harry and his customers.
That in itself is debatable if its Romantic or not.
Maybe now I'll probably add it.
Those silly ponies in Ponyville have no idea what they're missing out on. At least Cherrilee and Rarity can flaunt what a good time they had and make the other mares whine and wallow in... whatever ponies wallow in.
Even if this story ends for Wingman (teethmarks or not) I do hope this is not the end for Gentlemen. There's such a rich world built up, ripe for the plucking.
3030155 Add it nao! It deserves one. Emotional conflict is one of the essential elements of a good romantic story.
One of the best stories on the site hands down. I can not wait for the conclusion.
Ah, brilliant and intriguing as always.
Hope the ending is as good as this story deserves
At first I was all, "Oh no! Love quadrangle!" but then I was all, "Rarity, you sly dog!"
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Well, I'm going to make the Changeling fic first and put out another story with Wingman/Harry after that. Then there's also Feathered Heart to work on as well. God, even if I complete this story, there's many more to come.
Reward for hard work is definitely... more hard work.
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Added.
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Thanks. Man... its been a year almost already, eh?
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Well, its a epilogue, so it won't be long. I'm hoping I'd have it finished by next week.
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Me too.
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I remember, when I was making this chapter, I said...
The premise is "Rarity, Fuck Yeah!"
This came out. XD
3030199 Yush! You, sir, have fulfilled my command.
Finally someone made that reference! I'm surprised there are still no crossovers between the Founders and Equestrian Changelings yet.
Well, to the second best thing.
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Credit to Ponyboy245 for that.
Aw the story is almost over? Well, it was a interesting read for damn sure and I can't wait to see how it ends. Also, for a second there I thought Rarity was a changeling when Harry started to see Eve.
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You're the second one who said that. Would have made an interesting twist, though, eh?
Oh, Rarity, you sly mother****er.
Ooh, can't wait for the finish! Damn I love this story!
Is Eve jealous at the end there with Rarity kissing Harry?
So Pinkie Pie is in the final chapter? If Pinkie Pie likes Harry, that be the case I think Ponyville won't be as dangerous as before for him.
Hopefully Sea Swirl and Harry, say sorry to each (Not get back together. That would just be silly happen in a weird parallel universe.) other and at least be civil to each other.
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Who says you can't be sneaky and generous at the same time?
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^_^ Enjoy.
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We're almost there. Hoo boy, we're almost there.
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Very erotic. Usually, when I write, I keep myself at quite a distance. Not on this.
Now I sound like a perv.
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I was kinda trolling when I put the preview with Pinkie. She was a... distraction, to say the least. She wasn't going to make an appearance in this story. But who knows. I may finally be brave enough to write her in the future.
Omigosh this chapter was amazing.
AH nice to see this is developing grand. now to see if Harry finally says something OR when Eve will say something with Rarity following her word.
I wish I could upvote individual chapters additionally.
That was beautiful worldbuilding! You incorporated Rarity's monogamous family, turning them into a believable part of your Equestria, and also explained how it produced the almost aggresively feminine Rarity and her desires and MO (for instance, why she doesn't outright reject Spike), as well as the results of her ill-fated meeting with Prince Blueblood. You even had her mention their second meeting, something not often seen, and her ultimate problem of having a reputation as being too traditional (i.e. chauvinistic)!
I salute you!
Aww, snap. Gettin' some jealousy up in her head!
Great chapter, by the way.
This fic...this fucking fic...
Just...god dammit...I can't take all this win. I've been looking forward to the chapter with Rarity ever since you hinted at it and DAMN did you not disappoint. Rarity's my fav of the Mane 6 and you just nailed her personality. The perfect character to have Harry fess up to. Just...ugh...every syllable of this was flawless. Can't WAIT to see how this ends.
And that little thing Rarity did at the end of the chapter? Yes....yesyesyesyesyes.
More good sir! More! xD
N-... No... No.... NoooooooO! I don't want it to end! *Drops to his knees and stares at the wet muddy ground*
Brilliant chapter. I'm running through all the possibilities of what could happen and whether Sea Swirl gets told in the end. She passed up a catch and a half!
My reaction to the end of this chapter
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3030493 Thanks, Brony Curious, you once again sum up my thoughts succinctly!
I think this is Rarity's theme for this chapter...